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My heart exploded.
That was not a sex scene, that was not smut, that was the most beautiful thing I've ever read. I just, I can't even.. I might be crying right now.
Beautiful.
@fallin_angel15
Aww thank you! I'm glad you like it :) I will update soon, if you have any ideas for the soty feel free to tell me and I will let everyone know who gave me the idea
@Ellie-phant
Aww thank you so much! That means a lot.I will update soon. I'm really glad you like it :)
I just read this whole thing, and I'm completely captivated!
Please, please, please, update!
This story really is so good.
<3
@BVB_Girlxx
Thank you!! I'm glad you like the story:-) I will update as soon as I get my computer fixed it won't save my stories so its really frustrating since I have to keep rewriting
@Ellie-phant
OMG thank you so much! That's what I was hoping people would get. I didn't want to make it dirty and quick. I wanted the reader to feel every touch and feeling that happened between the two of them. I'm so glad you liked it and I hope you enjoy more chapters to come. Now the big question is should they have baby or not?
11/6/14