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@DarkAngel2013
Well I'm glad you like it and hopeful feel like you are apart of the story. That's my favorite part of a story when you feel like you are in it haha.
@BloodyRoses
Yeah the way you write their relationship is really good and I can feel their connection while reading it. Its an awesome story
@DarkAngel2013
Thank you for the comment!! I'm glad you liked it and next chapter will have move Andy POV. I'm going to show how Andy feels about Emily and the whole having sex thing haha. I'm glad you like how they are with each other I don't want to make them to touchy since they are not really together. The way I see it they knew each other as kids so they are fine with each other on most levels :) Anyways if you have any ideas you want in the next chapter let me know I'll be happy to add them.
I really liked this chapter I loved the whole interview part and how relaxed they are with each other plus it was awesome to have an Andy POV im loving this <3
@eclaire
Aww thank you, I'm so glad you liked it! I hoped it was cute or something. i always worry about doing Andy POV's I don't want to say something he would not say.
@BloodyRoses
Will do!! And if that's your pbjective, you need a harder one, that was clearly too easy
@punk dancer
OMG I'm so glad you can relate! I try to make it so everyone feels like they are in the story some what. I hope you like more chapters to come and if you have any ideas please feel free to tell me.
I sat at the park my clothes clinging to my small frame, soaked in rain. I jumped when I heard the clack of thunder over my head. I looked up to have rain drops hit my cheeks. I watched as the sky lit up for a moment then everything went black again. I lade back on the table I was sitting, a sigh left my mouth as I sunk into my thoughts.
"Why are you laying on a table in the rain?" Asked a soft yet slightly deep voice.
I sat up to see a boy my age with bright sapphire blue eyes and black hair.
"I like the rain. It's a good place to hide." I said shrugging..."The dark is a good place to hide, so easy to get lost in. The rain is only good for hiding tears- this would totally be me
@DarkAngel2013
Okay be sure to let me know! :P i'm glad you are liking it so far and i hope you enjoy that next chapter. I really love your comments means a lot hearing from my readers
@BloodyRoses
If I think of any questions for it ill let ya know and yeah im the same Im always watching andy stuff XD who doesent???? hahaha looking forward to next chapter
@DarkAngel2013
Well I think for the most park I kinda know how Andy talks I have watched enough intervews haha I will have the next chapter up soon please let me know if there is anything you want to add. I think I'm going to do another BryanStars intervew so if there are any questions you think would be good for the story please tell me. I might do another back flash. I don't know I just want to add so much to the story but I don't want to go to fast or to slow haha
@BloodyRoses
Lolzz but hey that's the point its your story so its supposed to be your interpretation of Andy XD plus your an awesome writer so you should have no probs :D[
@DarkAngel2013
Sure I can do that, its fun to do them. Though I worry to much about not sounding like Andy haha
@BloodyRoses
I think that the story is going quite well and I dunno really I'd like maybe an andy P.O.V to see whats going in his head....maybe?? I dunno lolzzz im not good with ideas XD
@DarkAngel2013
Yeah bad, it was kinda boring nothing really happened in it.... Thank you that's very sweet of you!! Please let me know if you have any ideas for the story :)
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You've written the story in a way that is romantic and not to fast with Emily and Andy's relationship, so I say go for it! :)
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