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you should make ashley fall for andy, the indie fall for ashley, then reveal all this drama about how andy used to like ashley, but he's in love with indie now, and then the rest of the band is all mad at them...
@We are young and we are strong
Uhm.. Idkk.. Maybe like Ashley could fall for indie, than she thinks she starts to develop feelings for him too, but in reality she doesnt but she's still madly inlove with Andy. The she's drunk one night and she has sex with Ashley but she doesn't know cuz she's drunk but Ashley wasn't drunk and he took advantage of her. Then like Andy could catch them after they do it and then he realizes she was drunk so it wasn't her fault but he's mad at ashley, and Ashley acts like a dick. Then indie gets worried and takes a pregnancy test and it reads positive then have TONS of drama after that then she finds out the test was wrong and ya.. Sorry that's probably sounds really stupid but ya.. Lol i dont know.
Oh my gosh. I love you so much! You are like the nicest person ever and your really pretty! You have really good taste in music and an amazing writer! Your like perfect!
@the_unconventional
Thank you! I'm glad you like it :) so far that and confusion are my favorites of what I've written.
@the_unconventional
I'll try, I wrote a chapter today but I've been having writers block and I want to get ahead so I don't catch up to myself. Maybe this week if not then by this weekend. :)
No big deal if you can't update soon and this chapter was amazing just just hope that you do update.
@We are young and we are strong
Anytime! :) Its fine. I have no one to talk to but you have your awesome fans. (Like Me! c:) Im here whenever you need me.
Anytime! :) Its fine. I have no one to talk to but you have your awesome fans. (Like Me! c:) Im here whenever you need me.
@bvbrocks
Thank you! Its just been getting worse lately so otherwise I wouldn't say anything. I might have to take you up on that idea offer :)
Thank you! Its just been getting worse lately so otherwise I wouldn't say anything. I might have to take you up on that idea offer :)
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I don't know about that because in my first story (well the sequel) I had ashley fall for the girl that was with andy and I don't really want to write the same thing again. But thanks for the suggestion<3 sometimes simply getting suggestions gets the ball rolling for me so...
12/20/13