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@Katniss_biersack_46
I will maybe this week. I got a chapter started and I have a seven hour plane ride in two days so I will be able to write some more :)
@Bring_Me_Deadly
sometimes just hearing everyone else's ideas helps me just get ideas to write... And I'm just getting frustrated with my writers block. Thak you though. I have to go my friend is trying to type on here
If you do something someone else suggests then it might fuck up the whole thing, I understand that you say your writing isn't the best quality, But I haven't seen any change at all. This is my favorite story on here and I would like you to continue it for a wile… The part on there that you said you have no idea what you want to do with the story.. I understand, it might be writers block. I suggest you think about everyones ideas and really take a wile to decide which is best. Or maybe you will think about something in a wile. Stay strong.
You should do the thing with cc. Make indie start developing for cc but he knows nothing about it and he doesn't like her like that. And then Andy gets curious because she's always looking at cc. Then they play like truth or dare and all the truth comes out. I dont know. But you should really do a truth or dare game:)
@DarkAngel2013
I'm not for that whole andley thing or ships in general. If they were both openly bi or gay then maybe I would do something like that but... It definitely has become a trend lately.
@We are young and we are strong
lolzz yeah it seems to be a running trend in fan fics either that or Ashley and andy end up together :)
@DarkAngel2013
Thanks for the help :D and also I think my first story might have actually started the whole ashley falls for main character that lives Andy thing because when I write that, no one else was doing it and now everyone is...
@We are young and we are strong
yeah that's why I said to stay clear of the whole Ashley thing and then also I suggested the cheating thing which is also stupid hmmmm maybe just kinda keep it on the same path and see what flows you never know :) it might help to just write down random stuff that pops into your head that's what I do im studying journalism and this happens to me all the time I keep a small notepad and just right down random stuff like a word or sentence and eventually I find something a spark will come
hmmm im not into the whole oh she should fall for Ashley and drama drama thing but maybe her or andy should get drunk and cheat and then all hell breaks loose but then again I like them together hmmm I really dunno im not into the abusive thing either but it does add some intensity to the storyline maybe you could try to explore it without going too far as to upset yourself :) this is actually quite hard lolzz
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