Brain melting, cranky rant, page 2

It hurts that mine and Isis' fallen angels trilogy hasn't been mentioned*sniff* lol not really lol. But yeah I don't actually read that many stories in here now as a lot are too generic, I've moved over to wattpad for that reason, of course there are stories I read on here but to the point j think only 4 or 5 are actually being updated now. Tbh I haven't looked at new stories in ages as the level of writing was getting worse, I dunno what it's like now but yeah, there are too many generic storylines on here, 2 of which are used in our stories, but they're done to a better standard than what's about lately, like there's the unplanned pregnancy with my character and CC and the start of an abuse storyline between Isis and Ashley. Both of which are using mainly my own experiences there, apart from having a full term pregnancy, as mine didn't last that long when I had my son, but yeah, I won't give any spoilers out cuz there's a lot going on in the next few chapters lol. And yes totally agree with the inexperienced younger writers trying to write about things that they don't know about, like smut and pregnancies, there was one I read a while ago, a pregnancy lasted less than 4 months, found out the sex after like a week and the baby was smiling non windy smiles after a couple of days, that does not happen! And it really bugs me, I know it's only fiction but when things like that are pulled apart (can't think of the word I wanted to use, I've not long woke up lol) so badly I just stop reading.

@anathema
I've started reading something wicked this way comes but I haven't been keeping up with it because I'm so busy... But thanks for the list, I'll definitely check some of those out

@anathema
Thank you for the recommendations. It's always great to have people like what I write. Agree totally about Offline, it's an amazing story. Still reading your story about Gywn. Love it so much. Will have to read Succubus next. I love writing original story lines where the BVB guys are not famous. It allows for so much freedom of expression. Legends is an amazing story as well.

@xPockyCookiex
Aw shucks- glad you like my long-winded opus! It's like 150 pages in word, don't feel the need to read the whole thing! But never fear- the day approaches where I shall take pity on my readers (all 2/3 of them) and make a break for it, bust a move, and change over to a sequel.

Succubus is a whole different matter entirely. Though it does involve a lot of sleeping! ;) and also a great deal more smut. Because, I fear, I'm rather a perve at heart.

Though andy is still a heavily fictionalized version of Andy in both of those, I think I take a lot of liberties. ive never met him before. He makes an excellent foil for story telling.