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Homepage › Stories › Not Just Friends

Not Just Friends

Summary

For Alora, being a outcase for her whole life, wasn't easy. Meeting this guy was the world. Will Alora be able to just be friends or will she take it to another level. Its all up to Alora where this relationship ends up.

Characters

Alora Moore

Alora Moore

Andy Biersack

Andy Biersack

Ashley Purdy

Ashley Purdy

CC

CC

Jake

Jake

Jinxx

Jinxx

Liam Lundergan

Liam Lundergan

Chapters

Comments

Well... That escalated quickly.
Rockcandypanda Rockcandypanda
6/4/13
@BVBprincess
Right :)
BVB Baby BVB Baby
6/2/13
@BVB Baby
Its really good, I wouldnt have guessed it was a first, so dont be sorry. I just like to help people any way that i can with the writing expirence i have had. feel free to check out my stories for tips.
And ps, it doesnt matter what anyone else thinks of you story... as long as it's good to you... who cares right?
BVBprincess BVBprincess
6/2/13
@BVBprincess
Thank you! Sorry its my first time writing a fan fiction im sure i will get better. Thank you i will work on it!
BVB Baby BVB Baby
6/2/13
I like it! But just as "Consstuctive Cristism" you may want to think about making hte writing a little more descriptive, maybe just add a few more deatails to hte sentce, because it leaped into the sexy time really fast. but other than that, the plot is good and so are the choices of phrase. GOOD JOB!!!
BVBprincess BVBprincess
6/2/13
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