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the new girl down the street

1) The New Girl




I was in my room reading Edgar Allan Poe 'Tales of Death and Dementia' when ash busts threw the door. “HOT new girl down the street, come on!" he grabs my wrist pulling me up. The rest of the guys were waiting outside for us "let’s go" Andy said.
We walked down the street too two u-hall trucks there was two girls unloading the trucks. "Need some help" I offered, when the girls turned around their jaws dropped along with the boxes they were carrying. They looked at each other in disbelief then a girl holding a baby came out of the back of the truck. “Holy crap your black veil brides!!" she said. "BVB, BVB" the baby said pointing at us. "So your fans?" Jake asked. The two girls nodded the one girl holding the baby hoped out of the truck "yes" she said lifting her hand to her finds chin closing their mouth. “I’m shae this is Annabel" she said giving the baby a kiss” this thing 1 and thing 2 also known as raven and Emma." shae said placing her hand on top of their head as she said their names. "Well nice to meet you". I said "so do you need any help?" cc asked. "Ya we could your your help thank you." shae said.

We helped unload everything. When the last box came in shae thanked us once again. "hay why are you guys in this naborhood" shae asked “we live down the road” Ash said, shae shot her friends a look "well maybe you would want to come to my fourth of July party" shae asked. "I'm in if you'll be their" Ashley said "sorry but I don't do one night stands something your known for, try them" shae said pointing to raven and Emma. Ash stood their looking like he had never been turned down before "I’ll see you their" I said. Then we left when we were walking down the drive way we could hear shae yelling at raven and Emma.

Notes

hay im soooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry that I haven't ben righting but I had school and no free time...... now I do so im up dating and fixing all the chapters. hope u like it



Comments

No problem :D it just made things sound weirder than what they should've been

DayTripper DayTripper
6/1/16

sorry I didn't catch that when I was proofreading I'll go back and fix it thank you

@DayTripper

shae_bonem shae_bonem
6/1/16

sorry I didn't catch that when I was proofreading I'll go back and fix it thank you

@DayTripper

shae_bonem shae_bonem
6/1/16

Heeey booski, could you maybe edit your chapters? You have rape confused with wrap and it's giving some parts of this story a creep factor O.o

DayTripper DayTripper
6/1/16

@BVB_fallenangels02

working on the next chapter now

shae_bonem shae_bonem
5/11/16