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the one that bites

Torture

This the rewrite of Torturing. I've been told that Amelia getting her hand chopped off was a little too graphic and disturbing. Sorry. So here's the rewrite!


I wake up chained to the ceiling. I look down and see my feet dangling four feet in the air and also chained. I continue to look around the room and see a large table covered in torturing devices. I look around some more and see a girl with raven hair and ivory skin. She had long legs and glowing blood red eyes which alerted me that she was a vampire.

"Hello. I am Dissonantia. I will be taking care of your torture for Luca. We turned you back to being a human zo the torture would be effective." She says with sad eyes and a European accent. She rolls up her sleeves to her black button up and starts washing her hands. "Where are we?" She continues washing her hands. "Transylvania. Romania." I nod. "Were you and Lily close?" She looks at me and shakes her head. "Lily waz more my enemy than my friend." She dries her hands and then wraps then in a cloth.

"Luca asked me to do this. You really did me a zolid. I hated her." She walks over to me. "I'm zorry." She punches me in the gut and I double over in pain. She the punches me in the face and then uppercuts me. She holds out a bowel and I spit blood into it. She sets it down on the floor.

I hear footsteps and we look over. Luca stands at the door with a grin. "How is the torturing going Dissonantia?" She clears her throat. "Fine." He smiles and sits in the chair. "Use the brass knuckles this time." She hesitates but puts them on. Her eyes scream I'm sorry. She punches me in my side and I feel te blood pour down.

I scream out in pain. "Again." Luca says. Dissonantia closes her eyes and punches me in my other side. I scream once more. "Again." Luca says. Dissonantia blinks back tears and punches me in the jaw.

I hear a crack and the brass knuckles drop. Luca starts laughing. "Good job Dissonantia." She light grabs my jaw. "It's broken." Luca shrugs. "Oh well. Clean this up." He walks up the stairs. She grabs a wet rag and walks over to me.

She he presses it to each wound gently. "I am zo zorry." She cleans them and then bandages them. "Don't move you jaw. Not for a while." She unchains my arms and slips a tank top button up on me. She quickly buttons it and then chains me up again. She puts a pair of shorts on me and then chains me again.

"I am zorry. I promise to go lighter on you. He won't watch every time. Get zome zleep." She unchains me from the ceiling but then chains me the the wall and sets me gently on the mattress. She walks up the stairs.

Dissonantia's POV
I walk up the steps and into my room. I shut and lock the door and sit on my bed. I wipe away the silent tears and jump in the shower with my clothes still on. Blood washes down from them. I just wish he'd let me go.

I take ale off the clothes and drape them over the shower door. I finish showering and then walk into my room. Christian, the young butler Luca hired a few weeks ago, stands there cleaning. I wrap my towel around me tighter.

"Hello Christian." He smiles. "I am so terribly sorry Miss Dissonantia. I will come back." He turns to leave. "Now it's fine. I'll just get changed in the bathroom." I grab my clothes and walk in there. I quickly change and sit on my bed. Christian sits next to me and grabs my hand.

"Your knuckles are red." I nod. "From beating Amelia." He sighs and stands. "It's terrible Mister Luca is doing that to her. Goodnight Miss Dissonantia." He smiles a sad smile and walks out. I climb into bed and slowly drift asleep.

Notes

Comments

@Smilebiggerluv
Your welcome! <3

Ay3_its_Frank Ay3_its_Frank
12/22/15

@Ay3_its_Frank
Thank you so much!

Smilebiggerluv Smilebiggerluv
12/20/15

LOVE IT!

Ay3_its_Frank Ay3_its_Frank
12/20/15

@I_Give_up
No. It's just looked down upon. And obviously this is NOT a realistic book if I wanted to put a twerking unicorn in the story I could. So it doesn't matter even if it was illegal in real life because this story is not real life.

Smilebiggerluv Smilebiggerluv
12/3/15

ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...............................idk wut 2 say 2 this

I_Give_up I_Give_up
12/3/15