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Unforgiven...

Ella and Jinxx...


My eyes fluttered open to the golden sun in the sky, burning down onto us. I sighed, looking up at the dark haired male who I was lying on. He gently stired, and looked at me. "Morning." He whispered, kissing my head. "Morning." I said, giving him a small smiled. Andy wrapped his arms around me, and gently hugged me, making me feel safe for that small amount of time. "We'll get her back. Even if it kills us." He said, and I nodded, sitting up. "She hasnt been hurt yet, but they've put her in the dunegons which isn't good either."
"Well at least their no hurting her."
"But the dunegons are worse. The send every angel who goes in their mad if their in there long enough." I said, sighing, my head in my hands.

"She'll be fine. They don't just need her, they need us too, they wont do anything to her until we get there, and when were there no one will lay a hand on her." He said, lacing his fingers with mine. I smiled, and gently pecked his cheek. "We better get the others up if we have any chance on getting to Doomsday in three days." I said, standing up, and Andy nodded, getting up an following me out of the room. I shook the girls who got up, and then the boys, and soon we were all packed up, and ready to start walking. I walked ahead, looking out into the desert, nothing but sand and sky in front of us. We needed to get there soon if we haed any chance to save Alice and ourselves. But my main prority was Alice and Andy.They could do whatever they wanted to me, as long as they were safe. They had done nothing, it was all me.

I sighed, and felt a hand on my shoulder. "Stop thinking about it so much sweetie." Ella said, and I sighed, looking at her. "It's all my fault. None of this would of happened if I hadn't fell from the sky."
"Exactly why you should of fell. Andy has never been so happy in all his life since he met you. We all knew you'd get married, have children, you just had to realise it yourself. Your happy, he's happy, Alice is happy. If you didn't fall, if you didn't fall into Andys garden, you would both probably be single, waiting for the right person to come along. But you are right for eachother so then youve found what people search most their lives for. Don't you ever say this is your fault because none of it is. None of it ok?" She said, and I stared at her.

"Really?"
"Really Bunni. Your his world, and he would do anything for you, and visa versa. It's in your hearts and in your blood." She said, and I smiled at her. "Wow, thank you. I really needed that."
"Well if nobody was going to say it I was going to." She said, winking at me, and I grinned at her. Suddenly there was a scream from the sky, and two shadows dropped beside us. One grabbed Ella, and one grabbed Jinxx, and they screamed. I jumped onto the shadow, trying to get him to let go, but he through me to the ground, making me cry out in pain. "Ella!" Jake called as the shadow flew up with Ella in its claws. "Jake!" She screamed. I looked at Sammi who was screaming at Jinxx who was in the other shadows grasp. "Sammi!"
"Jinxx!" SHe yelled, and the shadows flew away with them. Sammi dropped to the floor, and begun to cry, her head in her hands. Jake did the same, and everyone ran to them.I stared up at the shadows who were flying away, bodies in their arms.

A single tear slid down my cheek. I wiped it away, and tried to get up. I winced in pain, and fell back to the floor. "Bunni." Andy said, catching me before I hit the floor. "My leg." I said, looking at it. It was bloody, and bruised, and also bright red in other places. He looked at it, then looked at me. "It's not broken, but it seems strained to me, you can't walk like this."
"But we need to get there, Alice needs us."
"But-"
"No buts Andy, were going." I said, standing up, and wincing at the pain. I limped over to Jake and Sammi who were now standing. "We need to get there now." Jake said, his fists clenched. "Come on, we'll go." I said, limping ahead. Suddenly a pair of arms wrapped around my waist and picked me up bridal style. "If were going, your not walking like that." Andy said, walking with me in his arms into the desert, everyone who was left behind us.

Notes

shout outs, comment for yours

BVBgirl355

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Comments

Loved this story so much!!!!!!!! You had such a creative writing style and each chapter was perfectly written. :)
OMG I absolutely loved this story!!!!
I seriously loved this story! I adore your writing and how you developed these wonderful characters! :)
BVBgirl355 BVBgirl355
8/2/13
Thanks for the shout out and also I just have to add this.... I knew he was a blood angel I just knew it!
Oh.my.god. Dameon was...he and...but I...and...Wat
BVBgirl355 BVBgirl355
8/1/13