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Catch me when I fall?

Chapter 4 ~ Hey Miss

"Hey Miss?" a faint male voice said through the black hole I was striving to get out of, I couldn't open my eyes no matter how hard I tried. As for my body, I couldn't move that either. His voice seemed weird, not British? American? What I did know was that I was warm, warmer than before. But it didn't take away the aches.

"Did she move?" I heard another voice ask, this one seemed cheerier. It still didn't change the fact that I couldn't see him.

"I don't know dude but I've never seen a lip that busted" yet another voice spoke through my hazy black pit of unconsciousness. Were they all males? great. I was being kidnapped by men! I couldn't see but I could hear and smell and this place stunk of smoke, booze and leather. As if on cue I heard someone walk up in boots or heels.

"Guys leave her alone, if she wakes up you'll startle her" This voice was female and still foreign. Definitely American I decided. I tried again to move but as I fought the black pit grew bottomless. As bottomless as the water that night...

~Flashback~

"Hey Miss?" A man said as I stared at the icy moonlit water below me. I didn't hear him walk up to me, he had just seemed to appear. I didn't look at him I kept my eyes focused on the motion in the black water that seemed so peaceful.

"Are you okay love?" he asked again, he seemed closer now, I could hear him breathing. I clutched at the wall tighter. Willing him to go away as I stared at my soon to be grave underneath me. I didn't want him to see me cry and the tears were building up inside me, I was too much of an open person and I didn't want to vent to him. I took a deep breath swallowing the tears and centering myself again before speaking.
"Please..." I whispered, I felt him look up at me. "Just please leave me alone" I continued, shifting my gaze to the golden yellow leaves on the trees. I needed to keep my eyes anywhere but towards him if I didn't want to cry.
I couldn't let this stranger watch me jump to my death, nor could I let him see me cry.

"I'm not going anywhere" he sighed "even if me just being here stops you jumping, thats what I'll do" he mumbled. I could hear the smile in his voice. "Hey I'll even stand quietly" he said finally.
Through the corner of my eye I seen him lean on the brick wall, I could see his breath in the crisp autumn air. He was looking to the moonlit horizon like as I was a few minutes ago.

He seemed to be a genuinely nice person, probably did this for everyone.

"Fine..." I choked, as I sat back on the brick wall of the bridge, and with that I looked at him.

~End of flashback~

"She has big boobs" the man from earlier said, once again whispering through the darkness I was enveloped in. "I reckon a C or D cup at least man" he continued with a little chuckle. Great I was held by a porn group.

"Ashley! keep it in your pants for now dude!" one of the other voices scolded. This one seemed deeper. I hadn't heard this one before. I tried to move my legs again but they felt to heavy. I was too hot, struggling like a snowman on a sunbed.

"Dude I told you she moved before!" one of the mystery men exclaimed. These voices were becoming familiar.I was worrying in my own subconsciousness. I really needed my sight back.

"Well we can't do anything until she's awake" One of them muttered and began to walk away.

Where ever I was it stunk of sweat, tar and coffee, with the occasional whiff of smoke, I coughed and somehow rolled over. Finally some strength! I had seemed to have rolled over on to some pillow or some coats. That too smelled of smoke and a new scent of leather, curling up on myself with a new hope I began to relax. I wouldn't know where I was until I was finally out of the darkness.

I must have drifted off to sleep in my hope and panic of the black abyss I was stuck in. But I was awoke by a faded chatter and occasional scream. Ugh not this again. I moaned and silently rolled over, finally I had my energy back. I blinked and finally I was greeted with my sight.

Notes

Hey guys! So Allie has her sight back and thinks she's been kidnapped. I tried to make this part longer, but it seems a bit repetitive. I 'm sorry! Enjoy though

Comments

I can't wait to read more. I'm so addicted to this story

NoLongerHere NoLongerHere
12/24/14

Awesome story, I hope that she goes with them. I am so looking forward to the next installment!

IzzieDeadnow IzzieDeadnow
12/11/14

How about you add a character based on me, named Pandora, and she befriends CC, AND HE FALLS FOR HER, AND jINXX WAS LIKE SHE IS ONLY ABOUT aNDY'S AGE.

PandoraroseBVB PandoraroseBVB
12/8/14

Amazing as always. :) I'm so ridiculously hooked on this story. Lol

NoLongerHere NoLongerHere
12/8/14

@Jinxx's Angel
I'm glad to help then. :)


and yay I can't wait to see what you come up with

NoLongerHere NoLongerHere
11/27/14