Catch me when I fall?

I don't remember anything from that night but I do remember that I woke up in an allyway with a splitting pain slicing through my head, and the taste of blood in my mouth. Me and my cocky mouth. My blue skater dress was torn and ruined, it had a rip right up to my hip and was falling open revealing my underwear. The pain that was pulsing away in almost every inch of my body was coming from the bruises and cuts all over my body. Well done Allie, you and your big gob.

Finding the strength to get up I sighed as I got to my feet, I spat the blood from my mouth and began the long agonizing walk home. Since starting escorting I had managed to save up enough money for a shabby little flat in town. Luckily I didn't end up in another town and was still in my own. Walking through the streets of Manchester the in the spring the slight warm air caressed my cuts and bruises into a subdued dull thudding. Manchester seemed hectic tonight and it was a bleak Thursday night so it wasn't understandable. Confused I carried on walking with my thoughts in my head, like a running film of events giving me a head ache worse than the splitting pain already.
With no money I was still crawling through the busy streets at a slow pace. Why had I decided to be cocky instead of getting payed? It was too late anyway, I'd discarded my shoes half an hour into walking when I realized that I was going to get home in creepers. Creepers weren't comfortable for long periods of walking. The pain in my head was starting to cause me to feel sick and dizzy, the spring air was no longer helping, it was just making me want to pass out. The headlights of the cars were blinding my vision as blurry torches in a never ending black hole. It felt like I couldn't find my way out.

It was about 1am when I came across some screaming girls dressed in black tops skinny jeans and some sort of weird paint on their face. I was sure I was hallucinating because the girls looked like a zebra and a clown. But I shrugged it off and went to lean against the wall of the building they were outside, I didn't know what it was but it seemed to have a lot of these girls and a few boys dressed the same way waiting for something. With the screaming of the girls in my ears my headache had increased and I was now curled over in pain. It was unbearable, I couldn't take it anymore, with that the darkness clouded my vision.

Notes

Hope you like this Chapter guys I'm trying to make them longer I really am :D