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Wretchedly Divine (Gasping for Air)

Chapter 20: Invasion I

We arrived at the compound shortly after nightfall, having left the jeeps a mile back we were walking the rest of the way, slowly and silently, not willing to risk being found before we came in. If they found out we were coming, they may kill her before we could get to her, or worse, we may die. I have never been afraid of dying; however I am afraid of losing our one and only chance for freedom from F.E.A.R.
I had lost Jake and CC’s group a long time ago, now it was just me Jinxx and our guys. We were looking for an unimposing entrance, but I was already having a bad feeling about this place. There were no footprints to speak of, and not a single sign of life since the battle. They weren’t here, I was sure of it.
I motioned Jinxx towards a small back door we knew from Amy was the back door. Amy had originally been seized by the Rebel Camp. Her parents both died fighting us, and we’d taken her in after hearing her horror stories of abuse. It hadn’t been until a year ago that she’d even started speaking. She did her chores, but she never made an attempt to communicate with anyone aside from gesturing to a cleaned object, or a finished project. She’d finally given us the lay out only six months ago, when it stopped being too painful to talk about. She was actually almost the same age as our Deceiver, if memory serves she was a few months her junior. But in her time in the Rebel Camp she’d been worked to the bone, as they do all the children, and trained every other hour of the day. She was given plenty of food, but not enough time to eat. She was given a soft bed, but not enough time to sleep. When we found her she was unconscious, and thanks to Jinxx and his mystical junk she stayed that way for a couple of weeks. When she woke up she was among the other wounded, and Andy, the stupid bitch, was right beside her, recovering from his massive overdose. Thank whatever deity is out there that Jinxx had gone to ask him what to do with her. If he hadn’t… we wouldn’t have been able to save him, that’s for sure.
Jinxx came to stand on the other side of the door, and we listened. Soon we heard CC’s distinctive war cry and while he was still yelling we busted down the door. We filed in, and the place was just as deserted on the inside as it was on the outside. The floor was covered in dirt and grime, and there were no signs of life to speak of. We had entered the kitchen, and the place looked orderly, but dirty.
I looked over at Jinxx and we had come to the same conclusion. “They aren’t here.” I sighed and threw my knife onto the ground, knowing better than to throw a gun down.
“Wasted effort.” Evan said to me, and I looked over at him, wondering if he had anything to actually contribute or if he was just being an ass. Apparently he was just being an ass. He wasn’t honestly irritated. I doubted there was a thing in the world that could break his stoicism, but when he wanted to be the kid could be fucking annoying.
“It’s not wasted effort, it’s good practice.” Jinxx told him, giving him a quick, “Don’t you fucking think about starting shit,” glare.
“Whatever.” Evan said returning to his stoic state.
“Well, I guess we should just head back.” I told Jinxx and he nodded.
“Ebe, take the map and go get the rest of them, we’ll wait outside.” Jinxx told her, because if I had told her she wouldn’t have listened, she hated me.
“Roger,” she replied taking the map out of Jinxx’s hand.
After she was gone Evan spoke up, asking, “Why didn’t you just use the walkie talkie?”
“Did you want to listen to her bitch about what a waste of time this was?” Jinxx asked, raising an eyebrow at him.
“Touché.”


Notes

Omg, it's short!
Seriously though it's like blah, good new is the next chapter is Ashley's POV (Otherwise known as Ashtin, and the reason for this will be clear soon enough, because I don't believe I've actually mentioned it) and Andy's POV, and it'll be one of the last chapters where Ashley is in the Rebel camp, and if why the rebels aren't great isn't obvious yet, it will be soon. Anyway, I get to rant about my 13 whole subscribers!!!!
That made me super happy ^-^
So, it's short, but the next one won't be, and it'll be a little more action packed, and can anyone guess why our Deviant doesn't like Ebe, and why she also hates him, well here's a hint, it has to do with sex XD But anyway, I'll get back to writing now so you can see intersting things happen ^-^

Thanks for Reading, and please tell me what you think of Ebe, I'm curious about how you guys are receiving her so far. (She's uber important to the story BTW)
Stay Patient (Please)
Ashtin ♥



Comments

I am very impressed with this story. This has to be THE best story on this website as far as proper grammar, a very well thought out plot, and very detailed descriptions go, as well as the fact that I can actually just imagine what your characters are feeling, thinking, etc while I read. I adore this story, and hope you update again really soon! Keep up the fantastic work! :)

BrokenBVBLover BrokenBVBLover
9/23/14

@Ashtin
Personally it's your book so do what ever the hell you want! You wanna dye Ash Purdys hair pink you do that and don't let any one ever tell ou other wise. They can write their own books If thy want. ;)

@FallenAngelWithoutWings
Thanks ^-^ Both for the compliment and for the reassurance that I can skip XP Just because I love when people comment I think I'm going to post the next chapter tonight ^-^

Izzi Izzi
9/22/14

Feel free to skip chica! Your an amazing author and don't let anyone tell you otherwise

@BrokenBVBLover
Right!? I'm antsy myself, but I've got a while to go before I get there :( I think I'll just skip all the boring parts and go straight to the "We know where she is let's go get her!!" Well, not in the next chapter, but maybe the one after that. Anyway, I feel your angst. I can't seem to make the time between now and when they find her short enough :/

Izzi Izzi
8/29/14