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The Unexpected Maori

Chapter 1

I rock up to my first day of high school. I walk off the bus that stopped in front if the school and was amazed to see how big the school actually was. Yesterday my mum made me pick out what I was going to were for my first day to make sure it was expectable. I chose my Black Taniwha (Monster in Maori) T-Shirt, my galaxy tights that I wear nearly every day, my denim and leopard print converse and of course my eyeliner, I never go any were without eyeliner. I was walking up the long path towards the huge front door, in a trance admiring the antique look of the building and I was stopped by a tall brown hair boy probably in year 10.
"Sorry" I stuttered looking at the floor and trying to walk around him.
"OI!" he yelled signalling his friends. They form a circle around me closing every sign of escape.
"Excuse me" I whispertrying to push through the barrier around me.
"Not just yet" he yelled with a cheeky smirk pushing me into the centre of the circle. "what's your name baby girl?"
"I'm not your baby girl!" I yelled in his face.
"Oh ok then. So your emo and goth." He stated
I sigh and try to push through again.
"I know what I'll call you. I'll you the Ego girl. Emo and Goth put together." (A/N a guy in my class calls me Ego) He stated clearly happy with the phrase he had just made up. "Now. What's your name Ego girl?"
"None of your business Eric Lesley Smith." I yelled for the whole school to hear.
Eric looked at me dumbfounded, and then angrily. He pushed me back and I fell to the floor.
"HOW DO YOU KNOW MY NAME!!!! NO ONE KNOWS MY MIDDLE NAME. AND WHO TOLD YOU!!!!!!"
"My aunty told me." (A/N not an actual aunty but that’s what we call our Elders past and present)
"yeah and where is your aunty?"
"she js behind me. And she don't like you"
"Aunty Shmanty there is no one there. Your aunty is a piece of shit and you’re a phyco!"
"How dare you talk about my Elders like that." I feel my Aunty Evon try to talk to me.
"Child" she whispered in my ear. I close my eyes to concentrate on what she is saying. "Calm down my child. Remember how I taught you how to scare people off."
"Yes I do aunty but they don’t know how serious it is and they will laugh at me" I whisper in response to my aunty.
"See. She's a space head and a Phyco." Eric chuckled.
"Remember the Haka's your ancestors did when at war. Remember……….." Evon Disappears and I know that I am ready.
Eric Grabs my phone out of my hand and goes through all my music and reads out all the artists. "A Day to remember, A smile from the trenches, Avenged Sevenfold, Black Sabbath, Black Veil Brides, Fall out boy, Falling in Reverse, Good Charlotte, Guns 'n Roses, Hollywood Undead, JGeeks, Kiss, Metellica, My Chemical Romance, Mötley Crüe, Nine inch nails, Panic at the disco, Paramore, Simple Plan, The relapse symphony and Twisted Sister. All emo bands" He said with a smirk on his face. I put my hand out waiting for him to give it back, but instead of giving it back he Through it on the floor smashing my phone into smithereens. I take a deep breath and ignore my phone that is now completely ruined. I yell like they do at the start of the Haka. The barricade around loosens just a touch as the back away. I poke my tongue out like they do in the haka and scream "PUHUKANA ANEI NGA TANIWHA" (Back off or someone is going to die I am the monster) I poke my tongue out again and I role my eyes back.I hear them gasp and when I look around they are no were to be seen. But there was a different boy about my age (14-15)standing a few meters away with amazement in those piercing blue eyes.
"That was amazing!" He yelled and ran towards me.
He was also wearing eyeliner. And some awesome black converse.
"Thanks Andy" I said smiling at my feet.
"Yeah whats with that whole aunty thing?"
"Well she is really one of my ancestors but I call her Aunty Evon cos its easier."
"So you can see ghosts!?"
"No not really. I can't see any random spirit. But I can see Aunty Evon cos she is my guardian angel kinda thing."
"KOOL!!!! Do I have a guardian angel!?"
"Um….. Aunty says yes. And its your grandpa. I'm sorry"
"NO NO NO NO don’t be sorry! I'm glad to know that he is here"
I stare at the ground thinking of how I'm going to tell him. "He wants you to know that he loves you, a lot"
He stares at me with a glitter of sadness in his eye. "Tell him I love him too and that I miss him."
"No need to. He can hear you."
He throws his hand in front of him and I shake his hand. "I'm Moana" (Moana is Ocean in Maori)
"Nice name"
"hmmmmmmm"

Notes

I used my name Moana in it and there is a few parts in here that have happened in my life but please note I am not trying to make it about me. The characters are made up (exept 4 BVB) and there is no intention of making this story about me.
And I have used a few Maori words in here because the main character (Moana) is Maori and I use then cos I know them and I can. (Btw I am actually Maori) and taniwha is pronounced Taaaanyffaaa

Comments

@MoanaBVB
Mmm

@Ninja.Kitty.26

Haha i know you want to focus on your storys. I'm just sayin

MoanaBVB MoanaBVB
8/4/14

@MoanaBVB
... idk right now im just focusing on HFS and a little bit on 2 stories im co-authoring and im gonna start another story with someone very soon after we work it out a bit more but it's hard cause the time differences. And im also writing a few stories of my own the im not posting and i got a LOT of school work and im trying to keep if on drawings and reading and such. But maybe, it depence.

@Ninja.Kitty.26
You have me on skype. You can ask me. If you wanted to

MoanaBVB MoanaBVB
8/4/14

@MoanaBVB
... but im not Maori. idk words or anything