Children Surrender
Summary
Ariel May Carter has a sad past. Her father left to 'buy some smokes' about sixteen years ago. He never returned and her mother has had to take on two jobs, a waitress during the day and a stripper at night, in order to feed the both of them and still keep their house.
Ariel got bullied at school until she started dating Austin, the captain of the football team. She then makes one stupid mistake and loses something she can never regain. She gets teased even more now and just when she thinks she is ready to die, she is about to be assaulted in a traumatizing matter. Who can save her now?
*May contain rape, self-harm, and kidnapping*
Characters
Amanda Marie Carter (Ariel's mom)
I made some mistakes in my life, things I'm not very proud of. I cleaned myself up when I found out I was pregnant with Ariel. My previous boyfriend would beat me and when he found out I was pregnant with his child, he left me. He was the captain of the football team. I thought Ariel had made the same mistake when she met Austin but, thankfully, she didn't get pregnant. I am so proud of her for staying strong and finding somebody as sweet as Andy. In order to keep our house and feed ourselves, I had to take on two jobs. I was a waitress, at a local diner, by day and a stripper, in a different city, at night. I'm very happy that my crowned jewel, Ariel, won't make my mistakes and I'm happy that she let Andy into her life.
Andrew Dennis Biersack (Please call me Andy)
Just moved into Hollywood after we did the video for Knives and Pens. I'm nervous about a new school and bullies but as long as my guys are there, I'll be fine. I meet somebody who I can't seem to get off my mind. I love her red hair, it's abnormal but gorgeous on her. I will try and rid her of thoughts of yesterday. I will try to mend her broken heart, all she has to do is let me in her life.
Ariel May Carter
Lived in Hollywood my whole life. Never liked hell (school) but I force myself to go every day. Black Veil Brides has become my escape and I'm shocked to see that Andy Biersack has joined my school. Maybe we could be friends? Maybe we could be more? What am I saying? Who could love the outcast? I don't eat much, not wanting to break my mom, and I take the chips the cafeteria gives me. The lady in the front office acts as my care giver and she watches out for me, despite her code of conduct.
Ashley Abrocket Purdy
Moved here with Andy to continue our awesome band! If you don't like us, well fuck you. No, I'm just kidding, if you don't like our music then why are you listening to it? It doesn't really make any sense. Anyways, I love the girls at the new school! They're all really pretty. I like the red head, that starts hanging out with Andy, she's a really cool girl. Since Andy and I are so close, I think of her as my little sister and I watch out for her as well as the rest of the band.
Christian Coma Mora (Please call me CC)
Lived in Hollywood my whole life. I knew Ariel was being bullied, I was just nervous to say anything. I had been bullied my whole life for wearing eyeliner and liking bands like KISS, so it's easy to understand why I'm nervous. However, if you give me Monster I don't give a shit about ANYTHING. I will literally strip naked and chant "Shake!" in front of everyone. I saw Andy stand up for Ariel and it made me stand up for somebody for the first time in my life. I become really good friends with both Andy and Ariel and look out for them as if they were my siblings.
Cindy Abigail Campbell
I love me! I'm great and hot and pretty and gorgeous and everyone loves me! Yeah people call me a slut but they're just jealous because I'm way hotter than them! I think I like Andy, the new kid. I might break it off with Shawn and fool around with him instead. I hate Ariel and her emo life! She would do us all a favor if she just died!
Jacob (Jake) Mark Pitts and Ella Cole
I moved here with Jinxx, and Ashley. They kind of took me under their wing and became like my older brothers, especially Andy. His POV on life and a lot of things is really fascinating and it's made me realize that if you're not giving something 110% you're not trying hard enough. Don't get me wrong he is a really cool laid back guy but he can be serious when he wants to be. I really like this new school because this is where I meet my furture wife, Ella.
Jeremy (Jinxx) Miles Ferguson and Sammi Doll
Moved here before I met Andy and I love it. There's this red head who everyone teases and I can't help but feel sorry for her. Over the summer I met Andy in L.A. for an audition. I picked up my guitar and played and he instantly wanted me for his band. I even told him I play the violin and piano. When we came back to school, Andy started hanging out with that red head and she became really close to me. I had no idea that I would have met the love of my life, Sammi, in high school! She became my everything and I swear to one day marry her.
Nathaniel (Nathan) Allen Campbell
Town drunk and drug dealer. I've known Amanda since high school, when she was dating my best friend and got pregnant with his baby. We banged a couple of times and I buy her food and shit. I like anything to do with alcohol and when I'm sober I'm an idiot. I'm always drunk and if you don't like it well you can fuck off! Go ahead and call me a douche, I don't care!
Shawn Arthur Prince
New captain of the football team. I'm dating Cindy Campbell, yes she is related to the town drunk but she's hot and gives good head so why not? I don't love women, I just bang them for a certain amount of time then leave them. This thing with Cindy has to be the biggest scandall I have ever done! I'm going to laugh so hard when she realizes I've been using her! I hate anyone and anything emo!
Chapters
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He Wants To Hang Out With Me?
Ariel's POV (Intro)
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King of the Squirrels
Ariel's POV (Andy is so silly!)
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Through Strength In Self We've Become
Areil's POV (Intro to Amanda)
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My Saviors
Ariel's POV (Nathan comes into view)
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Hospital Visit
Switches from Ariel's POV to Andy's POV (Mom is still pretty.)
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A Motorcycle Ride, The Red Queen, and A Beating...
Ariel's POV (CAUTION! This is where it gets kind of sad...but it gets better!)
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Just Not Today
Switches from Ariel's POV to Andy's POV (It's a little lengthy, but it's woth it, I promise.)
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Holding Her, Taking The Pain From Her, Making Her Feel Loved
Andy's POV (Cindy does something she shouldn't have. The consequences are hilarious!)
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The Damage Inflicted
Ariel's POV (I hope you braced yourself...)
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Ariel's Surprise
Andy's POV (He gives her something awesome.)
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Remember That Assignment
Ariel's POV (Andy reads the essay given to them at the beginning of the year.)
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How It Should Have Been
Ariel's POV (An experience goes right and it's all because of Andy.)
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God Bless You (Part One)
Switched from Ariel's POV to Andy's (BVB goes on tour! Andy gets some bad news.)
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The Man In Front Of Me (God Bless You Part 2)
Switches from Ariel's POV to Andy's then back to Ariel's (A visit from an old 'friend'.)
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The Rebel Love Song
Andy's POV (His anger boils in his stomach.)
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Don't Break My Ribs
Alternates between Ariel's and Andy's POV (Who gets hurt?)
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Andy's Birthday Present
Andy's POV (What does Ariel get for him?)
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My Rightful Place-Andy's Arms
Ariel's POV (She wakes up where she belongs and feels great about herself.)
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Children Surrender
Andy's POV (This is the final chapter.)
@Kaitlyn_Biersack
Not long messages just in general telling someone and my family finding out, not believing me and disowning me
5/2/14