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You Make Me Want to Punch You in the Face

Summary

Rated R for language, sex, and violence.

Ren meets Andy in Chapter 5. The chapters before can be skipped, they just provide a little background on how Ren got into the business of being a bodyguard. If you decide to skip, you wont miss anything astonishing but I would appreciate if you read them. The story starts in 2011, then the story goes through time jumps.

This is a slow building realistic relationship story, NOT: they take one look and think they're each others gifts from god bullshit. There is attraction initially, but it's only physical. Andy a good guy and I'm not going to turn him into a cheater. They will get together eventually.

Yanaba Renee Torres, or Ren as most call her, was born on September 1st, 1989. She is a mixed race girl who grew up hopping from home to home. Eventually, she found a happy home with her father's family, Navajos that live in a small ranch in the desert. Ren's mother needed help supporting that side of the family, so Ren, with a heavy heart, left the ranch to help.

As a teen and young adult Ren worked as a waitress and tried to make extra money, here and there. When she turned 18 Ren entered the marines to make a sustainable income. She had started in her third year but suffered a great tragedy, so she was honorably discharged and returned home. Ren found a job at a local club the hosted bands on their tours. She found solace in music once she started to work at the bar. Though she wasn't talented in the subject going to concerts ended up being her escape.

Ren continues to provide for her mother's family. But, she isn't happy. Though she wont admit it, she hasn't really been happy for a long time. Her life seems to just be passing by and Ren can't find a way to enjoy it. What happens when Ren just happens to be in the right place at the right time? Will she take the chance and completely change her lifestyle for a chance at happiness? How does the blue eyed gorgeous, giant fit in to all this? If you wanna find out feel free to check it out!

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Author's Notes: Hello, I go by simple. This is my first fiction here, I'm hoping it goes well. I'm a big fan of BVB's music, but I'm not a super fan that knows a whole lot about their personal lives. If I've gotten anything wrong feel free to let me know and I'll correct it. Leave me comments and criticisms, I'd love to make this a great story.

Characters

Black Veil Brides - from left to right

Black Veil Brides - from left to right

Jeremy Ferguson, a.k.a. Jinxx, rhythm guitar and violin/ Christian Coma, a.k.a. CC, drummer/ Jake Pitts, lead guitar/ Andrew Dennis Biersack, a.k.a. Andy Biersack, lead vocals and front man/ Ashley Purdy, bass and back up vocals

Derrell Rhodes

Derrell Rhodes

In the beginning, boss and close friend to Ren. Remains in contact with her throughout her life, even after she no longer works for him.

Juliet Simms

Juliet Simms

Dating Andy Biersack when Ren enters the picture. (A/N: I have no ill will towards Juliet, or her relationship with Andy. However, that doesn't stop my mighty need to have an imaginary relationship with him. This will be a realistic relationship between Andy, Juliet, and Ren along with a realistic break up between Andy and Juliet. Be ready for it if you decided to read.)

Sammi Jo Stimpson - a.k.a. - Sammi Doll

Sammi Jo Stimpson - a.k.a. - Sammi Doll

Girlfriend and eventual wife to Jinxx of BVB. Sammi meets Ren in a surprising way and eventually becomes the closest girl friend she has ever had.

Yanaba Renee Torres - a.k.a. - Ren to friends and Yani to her Navajo relatives

Yanaba Renee Torres - a.k.a. - Ren to friends and Yani to her Navajo relatives

Main Character, 1/2 Navajo 1/4 Mexican 1/4 Spaniard, 5'3". She isn't short, this is average height, Andy and his friends are just freakishly tall. She has a few tattoos that will be described upon appearance.

Chapters

  1. Meeting Derrell

    Previously: Don't Really Look like a Fan

  2. Meeting Sammi

  3. Meeting the Band, Kind of

  4. Meeting Jon

  5. Meeting Andy

    Can skip to this chapter, you won't miss much, but I'd appriciate if you read the first 4.

  6. Meeting Ren and Her Issues

  7. UPDATE.

Comments

Hey, i love this story so much, but need to know have you given up on this?

Ursulabvb Ursulabvb
7/23/15

@imnotcreative
I was actually going to use his recent fight for another chapter! I'm trying to make sure I make them have some sort of emotional connection before I post the next chapter. :3

incase you needed an idea for another chapter, andy gets in fights in crowds and the security normally has to pull him out so maybe ren has to hook him out of a fight or something

imnotcreative imnotcreative
6/8/15

@EliteInsurgent
It is not! For I have returned and am currently racking my brain to try and come up with a new chapter. Thank you so much for reading my story!

Is this story abandoned? I'm just wondering because it's been almost a year since you last updated, but some people (myself not excluded) will sometimes put a story on an indefinite hiatus before picking it back up again. Is this what this story's like or have you really abandoned it? Because this is a really good story, so I hope it's not completely abandoned.

EliteInsurgent EliteInsurgent
3/10/15