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You left me... broken

Chapter 13

Lola's POV
"Sammi!" I yell when I get in Jinxx and Sammi's house, they let me keep a key. "Lola!" Sammi squeals and runs out of the hall, engulfing me into a hug. She pulls me over to the couch. "So, how are you and Andy?" "Great! We've kinda had difficult schedules so we haven't spent much time together." "Aww. What have you guys done together? Wait, I don't want to know!" I giggle and roll my eyes, "we're taking it slower this time. Don't worry." "Oh." "Ya, we went shopping with hallie, um and then dinner with my parents... That's it." "why with hallie? And I'm actually surprised you're not mad at Andy... He shouldn't have done that." She said quietly. "What are you talking about?" she looks at me funny and continues, "You aren't mad that he kissed hallie twice?" "He kissed hallie?" I whisper. She gasped, "he didn't tell you?" I shook my head, she sighed, "hold on, let me call Andy." I nod and she puts the call on speakerphone, she whispers, "don't say anything." "Hello?" Andy says through the phone.
Andy's POV
Sammi calls me, I pull away from hallie. "Sorry." I tell her before answering. "Hello?" "Hey Andy. What are you doing?" "Uhh.. Can you keep a secret?" "Ya." "Hallies over here teaching me how to cook so I can make something for Lola. It's going to be a surprise." "Oh cool. Don't burn the place down!" She giggles. "Bye." "Wait, Andy. Did you ever tell Lola about kissing hallie?" I look over at hallie worried, she shakes her head. "No, it would just make things awkward between them and I don't want to cause anything. I wasn't thinking straight that night so.. It really doesn't matter anyway." "I think you should tell her. But good luck. Bye." Sammi hangs up and I begin to kiss Hallie again, I pull off her shirt, as does she with me.
Lola's POV
"Sammi, he said that he wasn't thinking straight. What did he mean?" I ask. "It was the night after you left in the morning and he almost ran in the street. Hallie went to talk to him about cutting and suicide to make sure he didn't think about it anymore... Andy kissed her because he missed you and she reminded him of you. Lola you guys have the same eyes and he was lonely and depressed." "Wait." I stop her. "You said night.. I got back with andy the next morning and hallie was there, apparently talking to him still.."

Notes

Ok, when I paste it this way I lose all the formatting so.. Sorry.. And also I'm sorry this is a short chapter. I have four alternate storylines I have written to about the same point in but I don't know which I want to put up. All of them I try to do one thing but it doesn't work and then I start another way with the same result. I'll post another later.
Also, if I do something that is common with fanfics on here, just know I will make it unlike the traditional stuff because that would be boring and it annoys me. Um, I don't like sex scenes either, but sometimes I have to write them in so just know that I'm vague on purpose. This is already long but thank you for all the feedback, if you've read or rated recently it hasn't been showing up so idk if anyone did but thanks anyways.. Also thank you for commenting it really helps me be motivated to post!
-C

Comments

im on chapter 10 right now and this shit is pissing me off. i'm not liking this sister bullshit.. ughhh i want to stop reading because i feel like a bad person but i don't want to stop since this is a really good story..

@We are young and we are strong

Lol your not the only one. I don't know how long since I updated my story Saving Batman.

MoanaBVB MoanaBVB
3/23/14

@MoanaBVB
That's what I would do I write this one completely on my phone... And btw I suck at updating haha

@We are young and we are strong
lol XD I wish I could write stories as long as yours, but I still have to get used to constantly updating. ^.^ But usually I cant be stuffed writing my story at home so I usually write my story on my lunch breaks at school. and/or during class. so yer...

MoanaBVB MoanaBVB
3/23/14

@MoanaBVB
Funny thing is that now I'm having major writers block and can't write anything... But when I was writing this it was like I couldn't stop lol :)