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@Gemmeh17
Well Juliet is still alive :) sadly though Ella is gone. Even Blair couldn't save her. I needed some resolution to the Jakella romance. But even with this whose to say that jake and Audrey could ever be together with jake mourning over Ella so badly.
Well Juliet is still alive :) sadly though Ella is gone. Even Blair couldn't save her. I needed some resolution to the Jakella romance. But even with this whose to say that jake and Audrey could ever be together with jake mourning over Ella so badly.
@BVBgirl355
That is really cool, its funny, I think a lot of great things start with dreams. Adding julitte and ella definitely was a great touch though it was also very sad for me to read about what had happened to them
That is really cool, its funny, I think a lot of great things start with dreams. Adding julitte and ella definitely was a great touch though it was also very sad for me to read about what had happened to them
@Gemmeh17
I seriously appreciate it (: I just didn't want to write another direct legion of the black copy. I mean I used a LOT of the story like you know the tower attack sequences but I added my own spins, like adding Juliet and Ella. I've read a lot of stories just about eve or someone inserted as like eve and I wanted to just create something different I had I dream I was in the village and a shadow was chasing me that's how I got inspired for this :)
I seriously appreciate it (: I just didn't want to write another direct legion of the black copy. I mean I used a LOT of the story like you know the tower attack sequences but I added my own spins, like adding Juliet and Ella. I've read a lot of stories just about eve or someone inserted as like eve and I wanted to just create something different I had I dream I was in the village and a shadow was chasing me that's how I got inspired for this :)
@BVBgirl355
well it definitely worked out well, and I like the way you looked at the whole situation really :D
well it definitely worked out well, and I like the way you looked at the whole situation really :D
@Gemmeh17
Thank you :) I figured if they were really in this story situation then they wouldn't really have the band since there wouldn't really be electricity. I figured it flips on and off because in legion of the black there are electrical wires and towers but if government fell no one would be operating power systems so the whole rock band wouldn't really happen. So I use the lyrics as a guiding line :)
Thank you :) I figured if they were really in this story situation then they wouldn't really have the band since there wouldn't really be electricity. I figured it flips on and off because in legion of the black there are electrical wires and towers but if government fell no one would be operating power systems so the whole rock band wouldn't really happen. So I use the lyrics as a guiding line :)
I absolutely love how you include the lyrics of bvb's songs, but you make them go with the story changing a few words so it doesn't seem like you just copied and pasted them
Don't just leave it like that!!!! Update soon as I want to find out what's going to happen! Damn this is a great story and I can't wait for the new chapter!
;..."( JAKE IS GOING TO LEAVE HER AND GO TO ELLA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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