Broken Lungs - Comments, page 6

@BVBgirl355



@Screaming Tears



@Cassie_BVBLover



@Naefallenangel
Well, I was thinking of doing a filler chapter in her moms pov showing what happened to her, until me and jess can come up with an idea for our next combined chapters. What do you guys think? :3

Cliffhanger? ):

Cliffhanger ;~;

Aaaaaahhhhhhh. Blehhhhhhh cliffhangers are EVIL!!!!!

If Alex touched her I will go into this story and murder him

@Screaming Tears
And I lerve yew
Thank you very much! Me and jess will both update with a new chapter tonight :)

I lerve does fan fiction.

@BVBgirl355
Thank you so much sweetpea! That really means a lot to me! ;-;

I really love this story (: Mel is such a strong character and such a loyal person. Wonderful description and internal monologues! Great job

@Cassie_BVBLover
Thank you! Lol but that last chapter was mostly jess's writing from hers, I have it match mine and added in a few of my ownthings and put eeverythingin my pov instead. The part from where ashley wakes her up to leaving getting off the buswas hers as well as her getting off stage to her leaving from sickness. So she gets most the credit lol

Lol You're an awesome writer.

@BVBgirl355
Lol doesn't it? I don't see how people can do it. Haha


@Cassie_BVBLover
I didn't even see it coming! Lol

Whoa .-. did not see that coming!!

Fucking sideways sounds painful...or at least unpleasant...haha great chapter (:

@WhiteRabbit
Oh ikr ? Im such a angel aha

@Jessbvbarmyforlife
GOD DAMN
What an angel lol

@I_am_bulletproof



@WhiteRabbit. Yeah.. Julia's violent she fucking chucked a controller at my head, locked me in the garage then throw me out the door in a matter of 5 minutes

YOU GO GLEN COCO

@I_am_bulletproof
Violent you are! haha but there you go ;)

@WhiteRabbit
Aha ask jess.. I have no patience! Lol i almost beat her up with a lamp one time for not updating aha!