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A Saviour Will Be There - Comments, page 2

I'm gonna update soon. This story will be good, but not perfect. Nothing is perfect.

@AndyIsAllah
Ye its one of her first ones but tbh anks i agree

amy marie purdy amy marie purdy
12/16/15

pretty good, just not perfect by any means,

-5/10 IGN

AndyIsAllah AndyIsAllah
12/16/15

Thanks

@Goon
I fixed the grammar and stuff.

@Goon

Its My First story and I have Dyslixeya

It has a lot of potential. You should try to proofread before you post to avoid unnecessary capitalization and grammar, that's what makes a story good.. besides the content obviously.

Goon Goon
12/16/15