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@BVBHeartofFire5190
Yeah I tend to go into a lot of detail when I talk about High School and stuff sorry about that lol. Anyways, Writing always helped me pay attention back then and doodling every once in a while lol Also wanted to show you this. This is the new cover my friend Alexis (aka Kat) made for the book. I wanted to put it up in the characters section but its not showing up much like Dragon's did (stupid thing). So here's what it looks like. Tell me what you think kay?
http://imgur.com/18vCsoP
Until Next Chapter (which will be up soon! Promise!)
-Kyrie Kerr
that really as detailed damn! all i did in high school was doodle and slightly pay attention (doodling helped me listen better idk y) but wow on the details. :)
@BVBHeartofFire5190
My High School years weren't that bad when I was with Jon, but after we broke up things got really bad. I lost my cat to feline diabetes (the same one I wrote about that Ravyn had), and my niece Isabella was Murdered (by her father of all people, the Methed out motherfucker, and she was only a month old too!) all in the same year just a few months apart from one another. THEN, in 2010, a guy named Jonathon Mullinix (I wrote him into the story as well), decided that he was going to try and get back at my Jon- Angel- (who he had had a long standing rivalry with when they both went to the same school in Turlock. I know I wrote about that part in the chapt. that was a day in Ravyn's life, the second part). Jon and I weren't even together at the time but the idjit knew I still had feelings for him and believed that Jon did too. So, the jackass pushed me down two flights of stairs when we were at MJC doing the County Honor Choir practice performance the night before the concert. I SOMEHOW (I still don't know how I did it to this day, guess it was just sheer willpower lol) still made myself get up on stage the next night, with all my injuries that I had, and sang along with everyone else in my choir class, as well as the choir classes from the rest of the High Schools that were supposed to sing with us that night. THAT was all in my Sr. year, after Jon had graduated. The only good thing out of all of that? JOn and I had kept in contact, and the day I had to put my cat down, he had decided to come and visit our teacher and shit and he saw me when I was leaving the school. The damn boy didn't even have to ask me what was wrong that day, he just saw the look on my face and came over and hugged me tightly, saying everything would be okay. It had been like he KNEW what was wrong and was trying to make me feel better, just like he used to when we were together and just like he does now days. THAT was the only good part of my Sr. year. Oh! The other reason Mullinix pushed me? He for SOME REASON, believed a rumor that was going around about me, it being that I was apparently pregnant with Jon's kid (I wasn't), and he thought he could get back at Jon by making us lose our (NON-EXISTENT) Child. Fucking Dumbass...
Anyways, I got chapter 38 done finally. I'll be posting it in just a sec. Let me know what you think about how I went with it once you get a chance to read it. As always, love your feedback and stuff lol.
Until next time!
- Kyrie Kerr
@Kyrie Kerr
ugh I hated my high school was constantly teased and had no friends i had food thrown at me at lunch and none of the other teachers or staff ever did anything about it. Ik i should hate the people more but as of right now the way the staff handled it was what made me hate the place. plus they put me in truancy court for missing a lot of school because my high anxiety kept me from going. I left as soon as i turned 16 but i graduated a year early in GED classes so that was a plus lol. and thanks about the ideas. i always have them just cant put them into context. I'm more of a visual artist i guess. I do a lot with make up , doodles and photo manipulations. And wow on the being married already lol i was engaged at 17 but we called it off due to differences. He was a redneck country boy and well i wasn't where i am today in wearing mostly black and listening to rock music but i was different from him plus he wanted me to move away with him and I love my family too much to leave (i'm a homebody lol) Lol okay i think i am rambling now...lol...but yea lol
:)
@BVBHeartofFire5190
Thanks Sam your ideas were actually really good and I may end up doing that. Right now I just got Ravyn a new Big prezzie form Jarreth and stuff and I stopped working on it for a bit. Hell I've been up since 4:30 this morning and read chapt. 35 and wrote out 36. I plan on working on 37 in a little bit but it will have to be after I go to my old High School and visit my old teachers. I got the idea to do that today seeing as Jon and I were always planning on going and visiting but we haven't had the chance yet. I want to go because the last time I saw them I was with my ex-husband and that was just a bad day all around lmao. That and I think my old teachers are going to be surprised that Jon and I are back together and are engaged as well. We hadn't been together since High School and that was the last time Jon saw them and stuff so I think it will be good for both of us to go and see them but I plan on going and seeing them first and gushing about my engagement lmao
As soon as I get back home from that today I'll start on chapter 37 and hopefully have it up soon lmao
Until then! Thanks again for all the comments and let me know what you think about the Ravyn and Angel chapters. I kind of like what I did in chapt. 35 and 36 (I won't give anything away just yet but I had fun doing it, being able to put one of my own poems in there like what I did with Cutter's Lullaby haha)
- Kyrie Kerr
@Kyrie Kerr
dont worry too much about rambling i have a tendency to do it as well when certain topics come up lol.
And no! No killing Ravyn! I hate when stories kill of cool people it sucks. Its like "NO I was just starting to connect with this person" (hence my dislike of 'Game of Thrones') but yes i really do like this story and sorry that you have no ideas on what to do with Andy and Vixen. Maybe just keep up with the dragon's den school stuff for now and maybe like the head of the bad guys finds out about Vixen's sister and stuff and maybe confronts her but doesnt do anything about it yet, just lets the higher ups know about it or something. Sometimes I get small ideas off of other stories and I kinda go with it lol. I'm not really much of a writer but I do have a bad ass OC lol. I'm getting ready to read the next chapter soon. but seeing as i just woke up and my stomach is rumbling maybe I should take car of that first, although there probably isnt much to eat in my house. lol. Oh and good luck with the twins and stuff hopefully all goes well! if you ever need someone I'm a great listener :)
Have a Great day!
Sam
@BVBHeartofFire5190
Also, seeing as BVBFF is being a total DICKBAG right now and not showing him, Here's a picture of who Dragon is and a short description of him and stuff. Much like what I've done with all the others in the character section. For some reason BVBFF Won't let me post that character. WHY I still don't understand but either way, here' Dragon's picture and his description:
Picture: http://imgur.com/h7telFL
Description:
Shape-Shifter. Shifting animal form is a Dragon (hence the nickname). Age: 17 almost 18. He is and informant of Faith's and friends with Kitty and Taylor. Friend/Brother (friend who is like a brother) to both Angel and Ravyn. Beta for The Dragon's Den Pack (Angel Ravyn and Dragon's misfit pack). Yes this is a real picture of my friend Ryan aka Dragon. High School Picture.
@BVBHeartofFire5190
Well then! There goes one idea I had for Ravyn and Angel! Haha. I hadn't originally wanted to do what I was thinking I was gonna do for Ravyn seeing as Ravyn is pretty much the embodiment of myself (minus all the smoking, drinking and tattoos, but I so wish I could have her back tattoo. Seriously. I use it in every character I base off myself). I wish I could draw like Ravyn too but I'm total shit at it- I TOTALLY didn't inherit my Grandpa Steven and Dad's abilities to draw...which really SUCKS ASS!!! Anyways, like I was saying, I WISH I had Ravyn's tattoos, her "Clover Marie" tattoo included- that's explained in the author's note on chapter 35, which I'm about to post once I'm done typing all of this up lol- but unfortunately I don't have any tattoos myself. YET. I also wanted to get the Dark Mark tattoo that Ravyn did on Vixen (Chapter 34 I believe), as well as a few other tattoos I used in this story, but I know that the first two tattoos I'm getting is my "Clover Marie Wood" tattoo ("Clover Marie Wood March 21st, 2001- January 27th, 2009" is what it's gonna say in a cursive like script. If I ever get the chance to TRY and draw it up I'll take a picture of it and post it in an author's note on here). The second tattoo I want to get is a play on two of BVB's songs, "We Stitch These Wounds" and Beautiful Remains" ("We Stitch These Wounds has always been my favourite album for some reason, I still don't know why to this day lmao). I want it as a symbolic tattoo to my fiancee Jonathan (his character is Angel- Obviously- in the story). I want it to say "He Stitched These Wounds and Created My Beautiful Remains"... or something to that effect. I haven't hashed it out fully just yet but I'll get there some day lmao.
As for the Ravyn and Angel thing, I had ORIGINALLY planned for her to perish in the final fight with Raymond and his pack, along with Angel- That would be at like the END of the book and is a LONG way away lmao- and the twins would end up in Vixen's care (I had planned for Vixen to be one of the twins Godmother's and have legal guardianship over them if anything ever happened to Angel and Ravyn, like what I had planned, seeing as Vixen was a skilled Hunter and Ravyn knew she would always be able to protect the twins), but seeing as you have taken such a liking to Ravyn I can't do THAT, now can I? lmao. Besides, I really didn't WANT to kill off Ravyn seeing as she is, like I said, the embodiment of MYSELF (and I DEFINITELY Don't wanna die! lmao). As for the twins, I've based them off my Fiancee's two kids, also twins, William and Novaleigh, so I definitely don't want anything to happen to them- or their character's in the story! Haha.
The funny thing is, I still have yet to meet them. They live in New York with their grandmother, Jon's ex-wife's mom (she's currently fighting her own daughter for custody and the plan is, that when she wins custody of them- and she WILL, we know that, especially with the way their mother acts and is going on with her life. Anyways, the plan is simple. Once Tina (the twin's grandmother) wins custody of William and Novaleigh, she plans on moving out here to California with the twins, her daughter Kylee and Kylee's two kids Rebecka and Sebastian, where- once that happens- she plans on releasing over the twins custody rights to Jon (and myself seeing as we're together and stuff), this way Jon will not only have a chance to SEE the twins, but also raise them, something he hasn't been able to do since the shit with his ex went down (short story? She told him one day, out of the blue, that she was a lesbian, was leaving him, and taking the kids with her. Pretty much she pulled a bitch move on him and stole the kids away from him, only to dump them on her mother and go and live a kid free life where she's completely destroying her life by drinking and doing drugs and probably screwing any chick who will have her, as well as only visiting the twins for about 30 minutes once a month. Hell, she even had the twins calling one of her girlfriends that she had at the time "Dad". How fucked up is THAT?!)
If you haven't realized by now I totally HATE the twin's mother lol.
Anyways, like I was saying, nothings gonna happen to the twins or anything. I don't think I could live with myself if I ever did anything to them- or their characters for that matter.
As for you having to do the opening after closing shifts, I know the feeling. Not PERSONALLY, but my mom had that happen to her when she worked for SaveMart and shit. There were times where I wouldn't see her for days when I was a kid, all because she had to work late shifts and then opening shifts the next morning, It was really tough on me as a kid but as I got older and she stopped getting so many of those shifts I kind of got used to it. It still sucked that I didn't see her all the time, but after I met Jon when I did back in High School, things got a little easier for me cause I was able to see him and talk to him about things like that and he was there for me and actually listened when I talked and shit. So like I said, while I personally don't know the feeling seeing as it's never happened TO me, I do know the feeling because of my Mom and shit.
As for the chapters and everything, go ahead and take your time on reading them, I'm just glad SOMEONE is commenting on the story and giving me feedback. My friend Kat- who I wrote the original Blood Secrets with, the very story that allowed THIS story to come to life- has even stopped giving me feedback on it and shit (Hell I don't even think she's READING it anymore >.<) so like I said, I'm glad Someone is reading it and giving me feedback and shit. I thank you a lot for that by the way, just wanted you to know that lol. Your awesome for doing so haha
Alright, now I'll shut up and end this so I can work on chapter thirty-six. Probably gonna keep going with the Ravyn/Angel stuff in the next chapter seeing as I have NO IDEAS for what to do with Andy and Vixen right now lmao. May have them pop up in the next chapter but not too sure yet. Plan on showcasing Ravyn's ability to sing, do piano and some other shit (piano I'm a little to A LOT rusty at, haven't really played since High School but as for singing, I'm still pretty good at that lol). I don't know all of what I'm gonna do just yet but I'll figure it out sooner or later. As long as I have music going and shit I should be able to write haha.
Hope things get better for you hun and let me know what you think of the other chapter's when you can!
-Kyrie Kerr
P.S. So sorry this was so long! I noticed as I was rereading it that I rambled, like, A LOT lol.
I will have to read them tomorrow I read the truth or dare one but right no i need sleep i have work in the AM. ugh i hate doing closing shifts then opening shifts the next day it seriously makes me drag ass all day since i cant sleep at night. Oh and nothing better happen to Ravyn or the twinsies that she is carrying.
@BVBHeartofFire5190
Oh shit! I never even thought of the Piper thing from Charmed! Lmao it does kind of remind me of it too (Goddess it's been so long since I watched that series lol) and I've got a soft back of both books. Haven't been able to read Acheron much lately cause I've been working on this so much lol. Hope you like the next two chapter's I'm about to put up!
Let me know what ya think of em when you can! Thanks for all your comments! Much appriciated!
- Kyrie Kerr
@Kyrie Kerr
yes very cool on the supernatural barrier reminds me of charmed when Piper was pregnant. I havent ready the dark hunter series in a while so but i do have a hard copy of acheron and styxx is on my kindle right now all im reading it bvb fanfics lol
@BVBHeartofFire5190
Thanks for letting me know that Hun. It really helped me figure out ideas for chapt 33 and stuff. Also, what did you think of the way I did the whole thing where Ravyn could smoke and drink while she was pregnant thanks to the whole Supernatural barrier stuff? I so wish that was a real thing that happened with humans haha. I wanted to be able to continue doing Ravyn the way I wanted her and everything and so I came up with that in the end. So what do you think?
Thanks again for all your feedback and everything!
-Kyrie Kerr
P.S. I LOVE THE DARK-HUNTER SERIES!!! I especially loved the book Styxx and Acheron's story too, they're my favorites so far and I'm currently rereading Ash's story in my down time. Just finished Styxx's earlier last month and like I said its still one of my faves lol
@Kyrie Kerr
I like Ravyn alot and it's nice to read a story from a different viewpoint sometimes. Honestly i feel ya on the writing...i get awkward when writing like i can make awesome like single scenes in my head but i can't make up a story to go with it. I wrote FanFic back when i was in High school (im 26 now) based on the Dark-Hunter Series and just sort of left it and found it while cleaning and was like damn i could have wrote more (sadly no longer a fan)
I am reading multiple fics at the moment so it takes me a min to get it all strait like oh ok so that happened in this one and not another.
So keep going with the Ravyn/Vixen friendship I enjoy it. My fave character (other than the main ones) is probably Faith she reminds me of my Alt Ego/OC Rayne Blaqhawk (I might change her last name IDK yet)
Just a baddass bitch who can kick ass in heels and show the men a thing or two haha
But yes i really do love this story and that is saying a lot because a few i have read havent updated in forever so im like :'( but yes love the story can't wait for more :-)
@BVBHeartofFire5190
Thanks Hun, I worked on those arrows for another story I had planned on publishing at one point but it was stolen away from me by the person I had been working on it with back then so I never got to really write them in the way I wanted. I decided that I would put them in here cause I did work hard on them and stuff and the ones I mentioned aren't the only ones. I have thirteen in total. Whenever I find the damn papers I wrote them all out on I'll do a note explaining all of them and their purposes but that may be a while.
I've been working hard on chapters and stuff and my inspiration bug is back and kicking! I've decided that, while my laptop (technically me and my Fiancée's), is up in Hayward, Ca. (I live up there but spend a couple days out of the week down in Modesto, Ca. with my mom and step-dad and stuff), with my fiancée, I would borrow my Mom's laptop and start on a little side story that deals with the characters Ravyn Garrison, Sorcha and Katerina Kirst, Angel Kerr, and Zarrion Anderson. That one will probably only be posted up on wattpad.com when I get finished with the first chapter and stuff but I'll post a link for it up on here once I get it up.
I do have a question. How did you like the chapter I did on Ravyn, her family and friends and stuff. I found it really easy for me to write it seeing as Ravyn is myself (literally), and all the things she does (besides the smoking and drinking), is literally my life...well mostly. My parents are all still alive and everything and I decided to make Ravyn, her family and friends all bigger characters than I had originally planned after I realized how easy it was to write them all and stuff. But I do want other opinions, like if I should keep that going or make them fade more into the background and focus more on Vixen and the others. I was really apprehensive of doing the chapters that I have cause I didn't know how they would be received and stuff. So, asking you, what do you think about them? Were they okay chapters? Should I keep going with the Ravyn/Angel/Vixen/Andy friendship and stuff or let it drop and focus more on the other two instead. Cause if you like it I'll keep going with it definitely, but if not I'll drop it off and make them more minor characters like I ha originally planned for them to be (as you can tell I'm still apprehensive of what people think on it lol).
Let me know what you think and thank you so much for sticking with the story and all. Its really good to know someone is actually reading the thing lmao
Until next chapter (whenever I get the laptop back that is)!
-Kyrie Kerr
@kyrie kerr
yes it worked thanks :)
I love your stories, I even fell in love with "friends" on your tumblr page (even though i'm not a MIW fan) I love the way you write and cant wait for more. (Love to have more BVB Shorts too though)
@BVBHeartofFire5190
thanks for letting me know hun. I just edited it and added a different link in the author's note. Give this one a try: Hopefully this one works cause this is the one I used lol >.<<br>
http://imgur.com/Yd1ZXhG
thanks again!
- Kyrie Kerr =^.^=
P.S. What do you think of the story so far by the way? I haven't gotten much feedback from anyone except my friend that I'm working with on an MIW story and I was wondering what you thought of it so far? :) always up for feedback and criticism if anyone's got it for me haha
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@BVBHeartofFire5190
I thought you might like that bit. Thought about a smut scene between them but decided against it for now.
Also! Started up another story that ties into this one but its about Ravyn and the gang, thought you might want to read it, seeing as you like Ravyn so much, so I'm posting the link to it here. Cant do the bvb fafanfic site (here) cause Andy and them don't show up for a long while and shit but here's the link to the story if you wanna read it:
https://www.wattpad.com/story/66992025-blood-secrets-the-hunter%27s-moon
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