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The Devil in the Mirror - Comments
I think you should make another story about andy and Rosie's relationship, kinda like in the first one, I think it would be cute, I love reading your storys, your a fantastic writer.
Idk what should necessarily happen between Andy and Rose, but maybe Rose didn't actually beat the other Her and she comes back and causes some drama? Or you could do like a time skip to after the tour and there could be a pregnancy scare and they could get into a massive fight about it because one of them really doesn't want a kid? But in the end (haha) with the second one they work though it of course... I don't really know what you should do with the story but I really hope you continue with it and make a third book too! I really enjoy you're writing and this story! Great chapter! I loved how strong Rose was being! :)
I love Chris but dammit he needs to learn to take a hint! He's fucked up so many times! He needs to understand that he is out of chances and that he needs to move on and let Rose be! If he truly cared about her, he would! Great chapter!
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