A twisted little adventure... - Comments, page 2

happy holidays! i personally love this story, if i may offer a suggestion...what if the guys find the girls with each other? just something to ponder

@eclaire
I know :( I felt bad whilst writing that. Poor Adena, i get really attached to my own chrecters and almost wanted to give lil Adena a hug. But don't worry! I'm not making Andy completely in to a bad guy. Things change throughout the story and all will be explained!

Jinxx is adorable! But damn Andy just seems to be getting more and more violent and dominant with Adena! I can't believe he laughed when he broke her nose! Who does that?!

Omg andy ashley and cc are so dominant and then there jake and jinxx who are husbands

MY FEELS OH MY LORD

AWWW JAKE

Awww! Jake is so sweet! But I'm really super interested in what's going to happen in the play room with Andy and Adena!!!

Please update I want to know what Andy is doing to Adena. I really like this story so far.

Please update I really want to know what Andy is doing to Adena. I really like this so far.

Jinxx is so pawesome :3

@IlovChristianMora



@DrewBiersack
I will do soon. Unfortunately I'm seriously I'll at the moment and my head can't cope for long

UPDATE NOWWWWWW

How soon will you uupdate!!!???

Oh god

@GhostDestroya
Ur questions lol

@GhostDestroya
Ur questions lol

Omfg I wanna know what andy is gonna do to his slave

Omg this is just so flipping good! I get so excited when there's a new chapter! I can't wait for the next one!

adena she reminds me of my sis and i when we get pissed. i love her <3 can the girls maybe try to leave? lovin it so far

@eclaire
Haha thank you Im starting it now. Its going to have a little section of each of the girls POV's I think, so it should be quite interesting:D