Be the Death of Me - Comments, page 2

I love it and I think the end things are the feelings felt by the main characters. Write on! Otherwise known as Update plz

I love it! P.s. I'm thinking of writing a fan fiction but I don't know what to do it about

Awwww new chapter is so cute!

Hey, I'm here if you need someone to talk to. I know you don't know me, but everyone needs someone to talk to sometimes. :-)

Take your time lovely we're fine with waiting

I love this story!

Nope it's most likely been a steady process for the past few years so it's more like her emotions are starting to surface leaving her a mess(OH MH GOD I AM SAVING THOSE WORDS YAAAAAAAAAY I JUST MADE MORE LYRICS...love songs are really hard when you're not in love BUT HEY the people I'm making it for are gonna love it(my best friend and her significant other))

yes to answer your question but otherwise awesome story! Maybe shes just infatuated with him?

I rather like the things at the end it's like we're getting an inside look at how they're thinking

Update plez!

Those quotes at the end are awesome. In an odd way they really tie into the story!! Love it by the way!!

Plez update!

Plz updert!

I really like it. I decided to read your other story because I love your writing. I can't wait for an update I really like this so far