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A devil's Kiss (Andy Biersack LS) - Comments
okay so i really loved this story but there were times when i had no idea what you were trying to say because the grammar or spelling was bad "Nothing says welcome like a tune of casserole, i thought they only give it on funerals" i say to myself."
what is tune of casserole? im using this as an example bc im on the final chapter and i don't wanna go through the whole story to find every mistake obviously im not hating like i said i love the story <3 just wondering if you realized the mistakes and if you were planning on editing?
that was such a cute way to end that i love it.. NOW ON THE THE SEQUEL!!!!!!
12/31/14