A Brothers Friend - Comments, page 3

Ooooh. Ash is one of those brothers. But it's okay. It makes me like the story even more. "With a rebel yell she cried more more more" sorry listening to rebel yell :)

Looks like they are in big trouble update soon

Can't wait for you to update! Great story btw :)

Great chapter. Can't wait for the new halter to be up soon

Great chapter. Can't wait for the new halter to be up soon

ok i hate you plase hurry up!!!! i wanna know what ash thinks :)

Yay :D read it now....end the hanging! I don't like dangling of cliffs of stories ;)

@Kvengeance
New part up! (=

:D

Weeeeee more please this is cute

Ammazing!

loved it keep the great chapters comin

Great chapter. Loved it. Keep it coming.

Keep it coming

Love this new chapter. Can't wait for the next update

loved the new chapter

@JINXXismyHero_Love_Him_Forever
I just put up a new chapter!! (=

Great so far. This is funny. I love though. Update soon

good so far update soon

Soo good. Update soon