We Don't Belong - Comments, page 10

@NikiFM
Lol. Ya just a little caution for no reason. But Will does add to fuel to that part of the story and jazz it up. And me commenting is just my way to show my appreciation (fancy words :3 )

@Kvengeance
Thank you ^_^

Oohhh snap! Love it

@JINXXismyHero_Love_Him_Forever
lol I don't really mind swearing as you can tell by my writing lol thank you for reading and commenting and yeah I had to put an asshole character in it that her parents wanted her to be with and all that jazz lol

@NikiFM
I love how she stood her ground and told will off he was such an ass (sorry bout swearing I had to say it). Can't wait to read the next chapter(s).

@abmora01 lol I thought so lol I really wanted her parents to be appalled lol like really insulted lol and surprised so I'm just like oh I'm gonna add that in lol plus it's like the ultimate rebellion lol

Amazing I love it and I love how she stood up for andy:) she fucked him:) cheeky

@Kasey J Vengeance

thank you ^_^ hopefully I will have another chapter up today or tomorrow

I absolutely love this story. I hope to ream more soon.

@abmora01

Lol I guess that can be implied too lol

oooooh I was way off I thought he was implaying she wouldn't be good in bed:) am glad my comments make you laugh and want to write :) your story mAkes me laugh too and read my teachers or mom can't make me even hold a book:) hehehe:p

@abmora01
Lol just that she was really getting into it and loud lol plus kind of just teasing her and Andy lol

@abmora01

Lol thank you ^_^ I always look forward to reading your comments lol they make me laugh and want to write more

question

when Ashley says that was pretty impressive on her part??? What does that mean I swear am not naive or anything I just don't understand what he is implying :)

And award for leading lady goes to NikiFM You are fantastic I say once again :)

@LenaLegacy

Yeah they were in my anthro book for androgyny plus I like their music too

I knew as soon as I saw androgyny that Tokio Hotel was going to be brought up

@chipmunkcalling
lol thank you and I love to hear people laugh when reading my stuff ^_^

ok i was laughing the whole way thru that chapter lol love it :)

@abmora01 thank you ^_^ and no lol she's a tough girl lol so of course Danny, Ashley, and Jake lost lol and hopefully I'll have a chapter up tomorrow getting a little busy in school plus i'm watching Legion of the Black right now ^_^