Now You See Me, Now You Don't - Comments, page 2

I am sorry. Yes, I understand now. I still love your story!!!!! Keep writing and it does NOT suck! I love it

@Dandygirl444
I changed some stuff. Is it now better to understand? :3

@Dandygirl444
He feels. I tryed my best to put all his emotions, but he feels horrible. He thinks he became just like the bullies the hated. When Angel dies, she watches he mournering her and when he sings she FEELS all his pain as she feels his kiss. His love is the reason she is back, his sorrow, guilt, sadness... this emotions hit Angel and beg her to live again. There is no need for words, being soul mates they felt each others pain and need. I tried to show the power of love and forgiveness.
Sorry if sucked... It's my first fanfic. :/

:( I just read it, so as soon as she comes alive they have a makeout session? He HARDLY feels bad or they dont even make it a deal that she had just DIED! and how "sorry" he was. Im not mad. still love the story. just needs some love.

@Silence's The Key
the value of X is -2
2 x (-2) = -4
-4 + 4 = 0

Sorry, nerd attack! haha :p

@Black_Winged_Vampire
THE ANSWER IS 2X +4=0 ...hah were am i ..whoah..oh hey sorry i was dreaming about my maths teacher ...she is a fucking leaving nightmare...anywho ...UPDAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEE

@Silence's The Key
OMG you ok? Wake up!

@Black_Winged_Vampire

*sees the purdy smile* you ....are...*faints*

@Dandygirl444
LOL Thanks! So I guess you'll like next chapter A LOT. Hehe *Purdy smile*

GAHHHH! I JUST READ IT ALL!!!!! OMG ANGEL!!!!!!!!!!!!! I KNOW SHES ALIVE BUT OMG1!!!!1 ANDEL FOR LIFEEEEE

@Black_Winged_Vampire

your welcome ^~^=

i love this story and i think andel would be better for this story than andliet but i support andliet outside of this story

Did not make it that far yet lol
bu i think andel

@Dandygirl444 Thanks! That means sooo much! :)

P.s. Andel (Andy+Angel) or Andliet (Andy+Juliet)?

Great story!

Andel...defantly Andel...

andel!

Andel!!!!

Andel xx

Angel and Andy ANDEL