Haunted... - Comments, page 2

fall thro the cracks? im so confuzzled

omg this is a good story so far i like it :)

ok i am officially addicted to this story, love it so far :) cant wait for the next installment :)

This is really amazing,plz keep updating,I love it :)

@VeiledSiren
Thank you :) x

@hallow hearted lool :)

Holly, this is amazing! Can't wait to read more.
<3 Alexis

Lol i feel so special getting a shout out lol :)

This is soo amazing,I need to know what happens plz keep updating :)

Omg I love this story :')

Plz update soon ! :)

I love this so much,I need to find out what happens ! Plz keep updating :)

Amazing plz update :) x

amazing please keep updating :) x

I like this update i can't wait for the next part of it :)

ie really got stuck into this :) cant wait for more updates :) love it

please keep updating this is amazing :) i love it x

This has caught me and I'm dragged in. I can't wait for another update

@thatscalledyes
thank you :)

This has definitely caught my interest. Only thing I would suggest is staring a new paragraph (meaning putting a space) every time someone speaks and also just breaking up some of your huge paragraphs into smaller ones so it's easier to read. Other than that, good job so far! (: