The Reaper - Comments, page 3

@ra_the_sun_god
Detail is good. It's needed to give the readers an idea of what the characters are thinking and so they can have some what of an image in their mind as they read. I use quite a lot of detail in my Fanfic.

I'm already hooked! Great new idea, i can already tell this is going to be amazing \^-^/

@Amatiere
Thanks for the feedback! I've been really anxious because this story is something that's been on my mind a lot. Like, I can post a new chapter to any of my other fanfics no problem, but posting this one took a lot of guts just because I've been going into detail and it's more... personal if that makes any sense?

So far it got an awesome story line and it's very well written! I could probably see her at first regretting her decision at a second chance. Then she meets the rest of them and doesn't? Maybe. Just a thought. :)