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@Bvb_Lover6658
sorry. I don't mean to bully/offend you but I am a picky reader. I have to know exactly why something is happening which is why I don't read the sherlock books :s and okay so Jinxx has a crush on raven. Even though she said that she "loved" Ashley. Ashley broke up with her the same day they got together. Because Jinxx fucked her........ I think I am starting to get the vibe of this story. Its very overdramatic isn't it? :) x x x
sorry. I don't mean to bully/offend you but I am a picky reader. I have to know exactly why something is happening which is why I don't read the sherlock books :s and okay so Jinxx has a crush on raven. Even though she said that she "loved" Ashley. Ashley broke up with her the same day they got together. Because Jinxx fucked her........ I think I am starting to get the vibe of this story. Its very overdramatic isn't it? :) x x x
@AshleighPurdy
You are very criticizing, but it wil probably make me a better writer. So thnx! Yeah I know it don't make sense, Jinxx had a crush on Raven (yeah let's go with that). I did rush, your right. Thnx for dah tips!! <33
You are very criticizing, but it wil probably make me a better writer. So thnx! Yeah I know it don't make sense, Jinxx had a crush on Raven (yeah let's go with that). I did rush, your right. Thnx for dah tips!! <33
@Bvb_Lover6658
it seems rushed :s babe calm down and take your time!!!!!!!! Yes it will annoy the readers but the anticipation of another chapter is exciting!!!! Trust me!!! I didn't understand the shizz with Jinxx either but I will keep reading :) X x x
it seems rushed :s babe calm down and take your time!!!!!!!! Yes it will annoy the readers but the anticipation of another chapter is exciting!!!! Trust me!!! I didn't understand the shizz with Jinxx either but I will keep reading :) X x x
@AshleighPurdy
Yeah I know it's confusing, sorry, I used to be a great writer but my mind changed a little bit so now I'm not as creative and I ran out of ideas, so I just kinda thought of something easy and wrote it done. The rest is better though! <33
Yeah I know it's confusing, sorry, I used to be a great writer but my mind changed a little bit so now I'm not as creative and I ran out of ideas, so I just kinda thought of something easy and wrote it done. The rest is better though! <33
Hey just read the first chapter and I'm confused!? Why do they love each other after meeting that day? X x x
@freaking sexy purdy girl
Calm down calm down lol, I just made the sequel and I'ma bought to add the first chapter. Will still lives in the house. he tried to get over Raven, but he gets more involved in the sequel! Sequel called: My Outlaw Eyes
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Calm down calm down lol, I just made the sequel and I'ma bought to add the first chapter. Will still lives in the house. he tried to get over Raven, but he gets more involved in the sequel! Sequel called: My Outlaw Eyes
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I totally get it, it's overdramatic to make it a good story, I understand where your coming from though. Yeah she "Loved" Ashley. But Jinxx is equally as sexy as Ashley, I don't see how she could resist. I know I couldn't
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8/27/13