Savior - Comments

such a cute story make more! :)

Oh my Lord this has to be one of the best, well written out fan fictions on this site. I mean it! A lot of stories will have so many grammar errors I get a bit irritated. Truly this is great. I'm an author myself, well up and coming, and I do make little mistakes here and there but I mean on some stories I see A LOT. I really, really, like this so far and I've only read chapter one. If you keep writing like you did in this first chapter you'll have no problem catching attentions. I love it, keep up the awesome work!

Love this story.