You left me... broken - Comments, page 4

I love it. :)

@andys_jackal_penguin
ok, I put hallie in the story because I couldn't think of anything and it was getting repetitive. Lola leaving had made Andy go into a serious depression and he finally got her back so he was heartbroken. Sometimes serious depression causes panic attacks. (I have depression anxiety and panic attacks and I know I have almost committed suicide during those) Andy had gone into almost a shutdown mode during it. Sometimes people become compulsive and do things they wouldn't normally do during a panic attack or something. That is what I meant by it. And honestly I knew a lot of people wouldn't like that so, I understand if you want to stop reading. You're not sounding like a bitch at all. I get it, I grossed myself out... IF I could I would go back and make hallie a couple years older but I can't now so.. I'm sorry you don't like it anymore... -C

hey so i read the first one and now this one and i honestly loved it but when u introduced the relationship between lola and andy i felt uncomfortable with the topic of rape and basically pedophelia and i thought it was a really bad idea i mean im not one to judge or anything, it is ur story and ive been trying and willing my self to keep on reading but i just dont think i can anymore I dont see how Andy would be so willing to commit suicide over Lola but then cheat on her with someone hes known for a couple of days it just make no sense i dont mean to sound like a bitch but youve just lost a reader :(

@Ashlynnkickedface
:)

I like Lola and Ashley relationship! They would be good together.

@BVBgirl355
Thanks! I didn't realize how long it actually was until now.. Haha.,

<3 I love this super long chapter.

@We are young and we are strong
Eh, it's fine lol. I don't think I'm that awkward on here, but I might be I don't know... I'm awkward in person trust me.

@BVBsoldier421
Ya, I just am not god at thinking of names... But thanks. I guess.. I'm sorry I'm really awkward at responding to these things ... Haha..

Even though its not spelled correctly, it makes it unique. Hell, in my stories, that's what I LOVE. Names that are spelt differently, but still are a name, like Hallie. It very unique and original.

@We are young and we are strong
Aye aye!! xD

@BVBsoldier421
@Lyrainthedark
I've actually been considering the twin idea for a while so it might be that.. Possibly. Thanks for the suggestions.

@ScottishAndProud
@izzy-biersack
@This Is Our Sweet Blasphemy
thanks for the suggestions! I'm going to make a list of all the names and take them into consideration.

I think you should do the twin idea! If she has a girl i think her name should be either Eileen Alexandria or Selina Kyle (Cat Woman).

boy called Bruce Wayne Biersack! you know... as in Batman!!!!

Maybe she could have twins? Boy and girl? It's happened before where they couldn't sense the other baby because, it was hiding behind its twin. Their names could be Mitchel Adam(batman xD and Mitch) and Cayleigh Jennafer. Just names in case you don't choose the twin idea:)

Boy!! Xander Dennis Biersack. Or use Hallie's last name

A boy!! I want his name to be Bradley! :) <3

<3 I love it! I hope that there is a sequel.

@We are young and we are strong
Don't worry tho I'm here till the end I promise^~^

@Frikin UNICORNS
I want to write Lola's POV.. That's why it's been taking me so long to update, I'm having a lot of writers block.

@SavedbyBVB
Thanks! Ok...