Short Stories & One-shots

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Star's POV -
I look around at my choice of men here at the bar tonight. I sigh when I notice no good looking men, thinking to myself "Guess I will be going home empty-handed tonight." Taking another swig of my beer, I look over to notice two gorgeous men have walked into the club and they are walking my way. I smirk at them and they both smile back. Walking over to me and one sitting on either side of me.
The shorter on says "Hey darling, what's your name?"
I smirk "Star, what are yours?"
The short one then replies back "Ashley and that's Andy" he points over to the taller man.
"So you guys are AA?" I giggle lightly.
Andy says "You know it baby."
Ashley looks at my shirt than smiles "Are you a Mötley Crüe fan?"
I nod then a huge smile spreads across my face "Mötley Crüe is absolutely my favorite band ever! Everything about them is just so perfect!"
Andy laughs "So do you know who we are?"
"No.... Should I?"
Ashley looks at me shocked "We are from Black Veil Brides. A new hard rock band" "Never have heard of you guys sorry. I'm not much into new music except Sixx A.M. Just because Nikki is in it."
Ashley smirks "Well we will 'turn you on' to us." He winks at me.
I smirk "Oh is that so? Well it won't take much to turn me on to you two."
Andy turns towards the bar "A round of shots for the 3 of us."
The bartender quickly makes up 3 shots of vodka. I thought "Oh fuck, these guys want me to get shitfaced drunk."
He sets them down on the bar next to Ashley and Ashley says "Let's see how well you hold alcohol." As he slides Andy and then me a shot, I grab it and drink it in one gulp. They both smile at me. "Give us another round please, and keep them coming"
After 5 shots I was feeling it, I was getting light headed, and I felt like I needed to puke. I saw that the nearest bathroom was a long ways away, so I covered my mouth and ran outside, barely making it outside when I started puking.
Andy and Ashley were hot on my tail, Andy grabbing my hair and holding it up and Ashley was rubbing my back.
He says "How about we go some place, miss can't handle alcohol"
I heard an evil laugh escape both of their lips, and soon everything went black.

- Forward to when she wakes up -
I slowly woke up, only realizing a few things. That I was on a bed, I was naked, and my head hurt bad. I slowly open my eyes to only close them again quickly. I lay there waiting for the light to maybe not hurt so bad. After a few minutes I could finally open my eyes, and I quickly see that I am not at my place, but at a hotel. I look around and look beside me to see if anybody was there..... Nobody.
I see that there are a few pills at the side table and some water, I laugh to myself and think "Like shit would I take those. I don't know what they are."
I groan as my head starts throbbing harder when I lean up. I grab the TV remote and turn on the TV, the first thing that pops up is news and the lady says "Warning for women at clubs in the West Los Angeles area, there are 2 men who are drugging women and then taking them to hotels and raping them. If you have any clues please call the number below."
My mouth drops as I grab my cell phone and quickly dial the number in, after a few rings somebody picks up. "Hi, I have clues to the Club Rape issue. I was just drugged and raped last night and I know who did it."
The man then says "Do you know their names?"
"Andy and Ashley, they said they were part of a band called Black Veil Brides. Also, I was at the 1 Oak bar, if you want to look for footage"
"We have gotten told about them before but we didn't believe it, but after 3 people telling us we will arrest them. Thank you, and please come into the police station later today."
I hang up and sigh thinking "Holy fuck, was I really just raped?"
I look over and see my clothes, a pile of money, and a note. I got up and grabbed my clothes, then grabbed the money and the note, the note said "I'm sorry you passed out last night and missed the fun. Here is some money to make up for it. Thank you for the good time - AA"
I counted the money and there was over $500 in there. I thought to myself "Should I take this in to the police or not? This is a clue, but I do need some money."
I got dressed and called a taxi, taking it back to my place. I hid the money, except for $50, and I took the note and $50 down to the police station. As I walked in I thought "This should be a fun experience."

Notes

First story! Should this be a short story and stay a one-shot like this? Please comment what you think!
Also, taking requests and featuring people!