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Saviour

Chapter 24: The End Of My World Part 3

There laid Lilly...Lifeless almost dead..She had a tube in her nose and she had a needle in her arm. She was weak and limp. Her eyes were closed...making her look dead.
(oh btw Island Of Yours by Social Repose or Richie lol is a great song for this chapter...its kinda a sad song..and p.s if you don't know who that Goth Moth is then you should be ashamed loljk but seriously check him out and that song)
I cried and rubbed her hand and cheek.
"Baby please...please come back to me..please baby." I cried silently to her.
"Mr. Biersack uhm we need to discuss some things..." he said and se this hand on my shoulder.
"She is fine...please come with me...We will be going just outside." the doctor spoke to me and I looked at him and then her and continued that for a couple seconds before I lifted myself and stared at her as I walked to the door.
We walked outside and the doctor cracked the door so we could hear her in case.
"Mr. Biersack..."
"Just call me Andy."
"Well Andy...Lilly in there has fallen with a sleeping condition. Symptoms of this condition were shown with her. Things like how you told us that she hasn't been eating."
"Correct." I responded beginning to tear up.
"Well lets just go over them. Things like not eating...Constant nightmares or dreams that affect the person badly...Barely any sleep. And dead like features as in they look sick, pale, dead-like... These were all symptoms of Lilly and she has fallen with this condition as I told you...' he began to stop talking as I began crying.
"Andy I'm sorry about this...but she will be fine..." he spoke and I looked to him.
"Listen if you hadn't come any sooner and waited longer to come..it would have been possible that she would have died..." he said and I cried out with my hands on my face.
"Lilly will be ok but we need to check on her and she has to stay for the next couple days but only a couple days."
"...Couple days...couple days!? I need to be with her!"
"Andy calm.."
"No I'm not going to calm down!..I have basically been separated form her for about a week! You cant keep her from me any longer! I need to see her!"
"Andy calm down if she stays this allow us to help make her better."
I cried and rushed back into the room.
"Lilly please be ok...I cant lose you...I love you...Ill be back...I love you." I said before I rushed from her room and hurried out of the hospital.

Notes

Soooo...What do you guys think?
Hope you have been enjoying this story and the chapters! Love ya and bye!

Comments

@Abby BVBLover
thanks! lol! i don't know how good it is! I just write and the story takes over!

@BVB_fallenangels02

Thanks so much I'm glad you went and read that story cuz no one else except for another person I talk to is reading it! I'm so glad you enjoy it and i think you write good smut! Lol I guess I just feel like everybody else writes better smut than me lol but you write good smut!

Abby BVBLover Abby BVBLover
6/17/16

@Abby BVBLover
I read Outcast, oml I love it! i couldn't stop laughing at some points! you write good sut, i write terrible smut!

@BVB_fallenangels02
Haha thank you i have ben worried but these past couple chapters but im glad you like them!

Abby BVBLover Abby BVBLover
6/17/16

Love it!