Courtney's POV

We had been on the run for days, we had already run out of food and water, the sun was beating down on us with no mercy.
"I need to rest my feet are killing me" Nicole moaned
"We don't have time to rest we need to keep going" I tried to encourage her, but to be honest she looked awful and I really didn't want to know how I looked.

We walked in silence for a little while before I began to get dizzy but I pushed on knowing stopping here wasn't going to do us any good. I heated a thud and turned around to see Nicole on the ground.
"Nicole you need to get up, we can't stop here it's too dangerous!!" I begged.
But it was no hopeless she was severely dehydrated and had passed out. I didn't know what to do so I tried to drag her along but it was no good. I dropped down on to my knees next to her, I started crying knowing there was nothing I could do to save her, I began to feel myself drifting off. Before I did I noticed two black figures walking towards us. I couldn't make out what it was I tried to force myself to stand up to protect Nicole but it was useless I fell back down to my knees and passed out.

Notes

So this is my first fan fic and I would really appreciate if you guys could comments how you feel about the story and if you have any ideas