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It started with my sister (CC version)

The birthday present

"I'll see if I can." I said.

"Ok. Well this is my house. Want to walk in the morning on Monday?" said Zace.

"Yea. See you Monday."

"see yea."

I pull out my phone and earbuds and play music wall I continue to walk home.

I reach the park that is 3 blocks away from my house. I go over to one of the trees a little off from the playground. I find it weird it seems like I'm the only one here. I sit down leaning on the tree. I go through my bookbag and get out my homework. I text my sister "At the park be home later." I start to work on my work humming along to my music.

My phone vibrates sightly scaring me. I look over at it. Rebecca (sis)- Mom and Dad want you home.

I gather my stuff and walk the reaming 3 blocks to my house.

I open the door, my parents scaring me to death saying surprise. I give out a wired scream from holding my breath.

My dad says "didn't mean to scare you honey."

"Sorry bunny."she pauses before going on. "Since we'er not going to be here on your birthday. We bout you tickets to Black veil brides. They're preforming tomorrow on your birthday." Said my mom. I feel my smile radiant off of me. She hands me two tickets.

"Why two?" I ask.

"Your sister is going to watch and keep you out of trouble."

I can see my sister spits out her water that she is drinking. "I have to go?" Said Rebecca.

"Yes and if I find out that you didn't. You will be grounded for two weeks." Said our mom.

I give my mom and dad hugs and say "I love you." I can hear my sister growling at me.

My mom answers her phone. "Honey we have to go now we're going to be late." My mom says to my dad.

"Ok honey." He says.

"Bye sweeties we love you. Be back in a mouth." My mom said.

"Love you to." I said. Once they leave I go up to my room to find the outfit I'm going to wear tomorrow.

I find my Black veil brides tank top I made.It's a camo color with yellows, light reds, and black. I spray painted Black veil brides on it but it's fading away. I pick a somewhat dark blue bootcut jeans and my favorite shoes that are black combat boots with spies on them. I put my outfit on a hanger and hang then on a hock on the front of my closet door.

I feel water droplets falling down my back giving me slight shivers as I put on almost booty short length shorts that have spider webs on then. I put my hair in a towel and walk back to my room. I set my alarm for 9 in the morning. I then set music on my phone and get into bed. I turn off my bedside lamp and wrap myself in my blankets.

As me and my sister walk up to the venue about 30 minutes before doers open. I see a huge ling of people some wearing "war" make up, a lot wearing the bands march, and some who look "normal".

As it gets closer to doors opening more and more people show up. When the doors open we all kind of cram together and get into the venue. Right now there is space but as it get's closer to the time for them to play. We all start cramming together. I end up about five to ten feet from the barricades and in the middle. As people where getting closer to each other I got suppurated from my sister in the mix. She probably went to smoke or hook up with someone.

As the cold starts to get to me I start shivering. Waiting on my sister response to my text and calls I text Zace.

Candy- Hey concert finished about 10 minutes ago.

Zace- Nice how was it

Candy- It was nice. Right now I'm waiting on my sister to text me back.

Zace- Is she suppose to be picking you up

Candy- Kind of. She was suppose to be with me for the whole concert but I got suppurated from
her. Now I can't find her."

Zace- Where are you

Candy- I'm standing out side in the freezing cold. This jacket feeling like it's doing nothing.

Zace- Not what I meant where are you so I can pick you up

Candy- Oh I'm at 87th and elem.

Zace- Kay I'll be there in a bit

I text my sister "Hey my friend is taking me home."

Zace pulls up to the curb and says "Hey get in before you become am ice-cube." I chuckle a little wall getting in. We talk and I give directions to my house.

I get out the car. "Are you doing anything tomorrow?"

"Sundays I normally go to the gym and work on stuff that need to be worked on. I'll text you if I can. If I can't are you free after school on Monday?"

"Depends on how much homework I have and I don't think I work that day either. I can tell you after school on Monday."

"Okay see you then."

"Bye."

"Bye and thanks for the ride."

"Anytime."

I walk into my house hearing grunts,gronds, moans, and a bed hitting a backboard. Should of figured, more than just my sisters car normally means this. I close the door and lock it. I change out of my clothes and into Pjs. I put noise canceling earbuds in and music on. Not wanting to hear any of that.

Notes

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So if you see random stuff in the note section that is why.

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Comments

I love it

@Black_veiled_dragon
K. And the update well be soon time next week.

i say make it a cc fanfic

Take your time.

Ay3_its_Frank Ay3_its_Frank
3/13/16

Your welcome. And thank you I'm not that great of a writer, I'm just like everyone else.
Love You!
-xoxo Frank

Ay3_its_Frank Ay3_its_Frank
10/20/15