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Kissing the Concrete

Chapter 44: Climbing

I clasped my hand onto the rock as I brought myself higher up on the mountain wall. It was heavy, but satisfying. Andy followed right next to me, seemingly following my lead as if I had done this before. The distance to the top of the rock was quite big, but it wasn't too big to conquer. I felt safe, knowing that I wasn't going to fall, since I had the help of the people on the ground to keep me up.

We got quite a few feet up and the view was awesome. Other than the trees surrounding the mountains, you could also see the forest outside the city and the city skyline far away. The sight made my heart flutter, and the sun was burning gently against my skin. My legs felt tired, but I wasn't going to give in.

"Hey, are you okay?" Andy said, as he climbed up to my level. He was breathing heavily and seemed tired from the exercise.

"Yeah, I'm just a bit overwhelmed from the view. Gorgeous, isn't it?"

"It's lovely." He turned his face towards me, looked me in the eyes and I could tell he wanted to kiss me there for a second.

"I want to kiss you, but I don't want to lose my grip." He said, smiling.

"I wish I could kiss you, but I don't wanna fall. Maybe this was a bad idea for a couple activity."

"Are you kidding me? It's awesome! Come on, let's go! We need to reach the top! I bet getting down will be oh so satisfying."

I giggled a bit as we kept going upwards.The height got increasingly scary, but it was also lovely to see the increasingly amazing view and the sight of us daring to push ourselves to the limit.

Reaching the top happened in a matter of minutes from that point on. Atleast for me. Andy was a bit behind me sweating his ass off.

"Come on, Andy! Just a few feet left!"

His eyes got increasingly tired-looking but he seemed determined, although I could see sweat coming down his pale, smooth forehead in the form of little pearls.

"I'm on my way, Iris! I- I just need to breathe for a while."

He stood still for a while, his eyes fixed on the horizon. After a while, I could see his hand in an attempt to pull himself up. He struggled for a while, but got about a feet further on the way towards the top.

"Iris, I don't feel so good. I...I don't know what it is."

"Andy, look at me." He turned his tired eyes to me, revealing that something most certainly wasn't right.

"Just ask the people on the ground, to wire you down. I will be right there with you." I said, worried. He nodded and did what I told him to, soon he was back down there. I got wired down myself and embraced him tightly. The hug got inceasingly heavy though, and after a while, I realized that I was all that was supporting him. Scared, I looked him in the eyes. They had rolled back in his head and he was unconscious.

"Andy, please talk to me, Andy!" I screamed.

One of the people who had helped us climb called 9-1-1 and I waited patiently by Andy's side. My world was falling apart.


Notes

So yeah. Another chapter.

I really hope you still enjoy the story, I don't know what you think about it righ4 now. Maybe it is a bit lame? Or is it spiraling out of control? I will include some more intimacy between Andy and Iris later on, but I don't know whether there will be any smut. Mainly because a. I'm not too keen on writing smut and b. I have no idea how much is allowed with this rating.

Thanks for the 10 000+ views, the nice comments and the subscriptions! If you still enjoy reading, I'll try update the story later on this evening.

Comments

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Fangirlicious Fangirlicious
4/25/16

omg this is really coincidental i wrote a story on Quotev and her name is Iris!

Fangirlicious Fangirlicious
4/25/16

@Jazzy JJ
Oml same. When I read the chapter where Iris took her "leap of faith" my mind kept playing "Better Off Dead" by Sws

Awkwardly Awkwardly
9/26/15

The mortician's daughter started playing in my head when they went to the airport. I love the story. Let me know if u make a sequel. :)

Jazzy JJ Jazzy JJ
8/18/15

The mortician's daughter started playing in my head when they went to the airport. I love the story. Let me know if u make a sequel. :)

Jazzy JJ Jazzy JJ
8/18/15