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Hanging by a Moment

Summary

As was typical of the promiscuous bassist of Black Veil Brides, Ashley Purdy thought nothing of staying true to his norm: partying, having one-night stands, and just overall living the high life. That is, until one night in the spring of 2015, when he hears a knock on his front door...and gets the shock of his life.

Life has never been very easy for Rebel, and she's never expected it to be. She knows that every time something seems too good to be true, it probably is. That much was confirmed by the judicial system forcing her to let a man into her life when he needed to be jailed...simply because he fathered her daughter. Considering all she's been through so far, she never once thought she'd get to meet any of the members of her favorite band, so when she stumbles across one in the middle of a grocery store, she counts her blessings.

Circumstances are strange, the events after their meeting equally strange. Ashley finds that he doesn't necessarily have to sleep with every woman on the planet to be happy, but also finds that he only wants one. Despite how crazy his life has become, will he be able to get the girl of his dreams while not failing the one who needs him most right now? Or will he end up being a lonely man with only his unexpected baby to love?

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Comments

@BlackVeilCupcake
Well, I'm glad ya like it. Reread it as many times as ya see fit...just beware that (SPOILER ALERT!!!) there's only one more chapter till the end! Mwahahahaha!!!
~Cyn

BansheeMoonsong BansheeMoonsong
11/5/15

I really do love this story I keep re reading it @CynysterLove

BlackVeilCupcake BlackVeilCupcake
11/4/15

I really do love this story I keep re reading it @CynysterLove

BlackVeilCupcake BlackVeilCupcake
11/4/15

I really do love this story I keep re reading it @CynysterLove

BlackVeilCupcake BlackVeilCupcake
11/4/15

@thegirlwiththedragontattoo
Bah, you didn't offend me...English as a first language or not, I simply meant that while compared to those who earn an income from their writing, I may be an amateur. Then again, in comparison to most of those little teenie-boppers that can barely write an English essay at their own reading level, let alone at a college level while somewhere around the age of a freshman/sophomore in high school...yeah, I'm prolly closer to being a pro than them.

Honestly, though, that's why I tend to keep a lot of comments to myself. Yeah, I'll respond to comments left on my works, but I'm such an Avant Garde that I generally won't comment on someone else's works unless they're particularly exceptional. It can be pretty hard to please me on an artistic and musical front, so I save my comments for those best at the game, if that makes any sense. *shrugs*

I don't really like first-person that much due to what I've already stated, and the fact that I can't really lose myself into an AU of sorts while reading it. I'm such an imaginative person (send me a PM if you wanna have another reference point, as I'm not putting it out there for everyone and their brother to see) that I prefer third-person. It lets me sink into that AU and feel like I'm actually part of the story as I'm reading it, so I guess you could say that's why I write my own stories that way. I want my readers to not just be able to identify with the narrator, but to be able to see themselves in the AU I'm painting, so to speak, to be able to get in their heads and pick their brains without feeling like they're looking directly through the character's eyes. That, and as I've had someone else tell me...it's a nice change of pace from all the first-person crap with so many typos and whatnot that it hurts my brain to attempt reading. *shrugs and chuckles*
~Cyn

BansheeMoonsong BansheeMoonsong
7/25/15
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