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The story of a lonesome ol'Jerome

Penis-clutching, Adams-apples, and Rose-handler's disease

*Gwyn’s POV*

Andy was practically levitating off the bed, he was so excited. He even clutched at his penis like a little kid. "I just need to make some calls!" He leaned in to kiss me, beaming, but I put a hand on his chest and gently stopped him, though I was smiling too. He was so fucking adorable!

"I said, we need to talk first! Before you make any calls or arrangements." He gave me a pouty frown, eyebrows drawn together. Then he pried my hand off his chest, put it behind my back, and brought me to him for a long, slow kiss. Afterwards, I was breathless and having difficulty concentrating.

He shot me an intense look. "Look, say all you want and I'll listen. Ask me whatever you want, I don't care, I'll answer. But I want you to come with me; my mind won't change. I fucking know it won't.

“I am comfortable around you. I enjoy being around you. I dunno, words aren't enough here, the point is that you can say whatever you want, but I'm confident that I know what I want, and I want you: Doctor Gwyn Hageman." He rubbed my back and smiled at me, his confidence returned.

I melted into his arms and kissed his neck. It was salty from our exertions. He held me, and we hugged for a while. "Andy, you're a crazy, stubborn motherfucker." He chuckled. His voice really was so deep and full. It was really sexy. I loved his knobby Adam's apple, I thought about how they developed in males in response to sex hormones. Maybe that's why Andy's was so prominent. The thought made me giggle.

"Anyway, can we please fucking shower? I am totally gross here. And your arms are covered with scratches from all those roses; you should probably be careful to keep them clean, so they don't get infected, you loony bastard. You know there's even a weird disease that roses can give you, that florists get, from handling roses? Like some kind of fungus." I ran my left fingers over the top of his right forearm, the inside of which was still bumpy and irritated. I couldn't remember which one of the fungi it was for sure... It wasn't Crypto...

Andy grinned, unimpressed with the threat of imminent doom from rose-handling. "Is that so? I just wanted to impress the hell out of you, and get you to accept my apology." Merriment danced in his eyes. "It seems to have worked. And showering sounds good. Then can we get something to eat? All that sexin' made me hungry!"

He saw me starting to protest, "You can talk while we eat, but I'm hungry, woman!" And he kissed me, at first just a quick kiss, but then he opened his mouth and slid his tongue against mine. I couldn't help but respond to the firm pressure of his lips with a whimper. When he finally broke the kiss my head was in the clouds. I could tell I had gotten wet again, I felt the excitement starting to leak down my inner thigh. Andy looked at me, grinned, and said cheerily, "So, shower?"

Notes

FYI- rose handler's disease is Sporotrichosis, caused by Sporothrix schenkii, which can also cause disease in animals.

QOTD:
other bands/etc. you enjoy, aside from BVB?

the list for me is very long. and the list of bands/etc. to check out is long too.h ere's just some:
(runs to itunes to check):
ac/dc, aerosmith, amon tobin, the beatles, betty blowtorch, billy idol, the black crowes, black sabbath, johnny cash, collide, cradle of filth, creedence clearwater revival, danzig, david bowie, dethklok, die form, disney soundtracks, the doors, drain sth, genitorturers, george thorogood & the destroyers, gogol bordello, guns n' roses, jack off jill, john lee hooker, kidneythieves, lunachicks, marilyn manson, metallica, motley crue, muddy waters, murderdolls, neil young & crazy horse, nick cave & the bad seeds, nightwish, nine inch nails, nirvana, oojami, paul simon, perfume tree, PIG, Pink Floyd, plexi, portishead, psychotica, queen, rasputina, rob zombie, the rolling stones, sons of an illustrious father, stevie ray vaughn & double trouble, switchblade symphony, system of a down, tom petty & the heartbreakers, tori amos, trashlight vision, type o negative, zz top, 12 rounds

there you have it. those were the biggest ones. don't like my list? make your own.

Comments

*NOTE* The author of this story no longer has access to her account due to site malfunction.
SmuttyPariah SmuttyPariah
4/15/17

Ok, cool. I don't mind plodding plots at all, but as a frustrated English teacher, I can totally understand the grammar and structure stuff.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh, i'm not changing it significantly in that regard. i mean more a stylistic change to make it easier to read: breaking up paragraphs, improving grammar and tense consistency, stuff like that. i've become a much better writer and i want my stuff to reflect that. if you're nervous about the changed, you can check out the newest version on my wattpad account. my user name is anathemadvm, just plain anathema was taken. i'm still likely to further revise the very beginning a little, but nothing is plot related, i like the plot as much as i ever did. i just want it to be easier to read, that's all.

anathema anathema
1/26/17

@anathema
Actually, the beginning of LoJ fits the story perfectly, IMHO. You establish Gywn as a likeable, but clearly flawed character from the door. It's much different from most other fanfic, which want to get to the Bride(s) ASAP.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh my goodness! i don't think even i have read it that many times, though i could be wrong! i've certainly only read it through once in one sitting! i promise that the edited version is higher quality, but i don't dare tinker with it here until i have the whole thing ready to go. right now i've edited through chapter 50, though i might need to ahve another look at the very beginning, because it's so plodding.

anathema anathema
1/26/17