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Homepage › Stories › The story of a lonesome ol'Jerome › Chapter 57

The story of a lonesome ol'Jerome

Outfit

What the fuck do I want to wear? I have no idea! I feel like dressing up would be dishonest- maybe I should try and look my crappiest, so Andy will know what I normally look like? But on the other hand, I want to look nice for him... Fuckingshittingdickstick!

I spy a black shirt in my closet that's kind of shiny. Hmmmm... I try it on. Ok, it's a little tight on the boobs, that will do fine. I find some jeans that fit, and pull those on. Then I put my boots on, because that is the best way to face your fate. I want to be buried or cremated with my boots on.

I frown. I don't usually wear makeup. I used to, and I own a lot. I kind of want to. Am I allowed, or is it a bad idea, if I might not all the time? And then a realize I am over-thinking it. Fuck that! I go put on big wads of peacock-green, blue, and purple eyeshadow, black eyeliner, and then curl my eyelashes before adding black mascara. Yay me. The fucking mistress of feminine charm for sure, I think, and chuckle. I go to the balcony to have a cigarette, wondering what's taking Andy so long. Maybe he changed his mind?

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SmuttyPariah SmuttyPariah
4/15/17

Ok, cool. I don't mind plodding plots at all, but as a frustrated English teacher, I can totally understand the grammar and structure stuff.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh, i'm not changing it significantly in that regard. i mean more a stylistic change to make it easier to read: breaking up paragraphs, improving grammar and tense consistency, stuff like that. i've become a much better writer and i want my stuff to reflect that. if you're nervous about the changed, you can check out the newest version on my wattpad account. my user name is anathemadvm, just plain anathema was taken. i'm still likely to further revise the very beginning a little, but nothing is plot related, i like the plot as much as i ever did. i just want it to be easier to read, that's all.

anathema anathema
1/26/17

@anathema
Actually, the beginning of LoJ fits the story perfectly, IMHO. You establish Gywn as a likeable, but clearly flawed character from the door. It's much different from most other fanfic, which want to get to the Bride(s) ASAP.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh my goodness! i don't think even i have read it that many times, though i could be wrong! i've certainly only read it through once in one sitting! i promise that the edited version is higher quality, but i don't dare tinker with it here until i have the whole thing ready to go. right now i've edited through chapter 50, though i might need to ahve another look at the very beginning, because it's so plodding.

anathema anathema
1/26/17
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