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The story of a lonesome ol'Jerome

Sorting through messages

*Andy’s POV*

I kept going thorough messages as I smoked. At some point during the night/morning, Jack had driven the bus to the hotel, and I hadn’t even noticed. The messages just kept coming. Some of them were really touching and supportive. Some were from other poly people, thanking me for giving them a voice. Others were from people calling me a manwhore. There were a few that weren’t in English. I saved those, just in case I hadn’t found anything at all in like 12 hours, I guess I’d have a closer look at them then.

Then, something:

‘Hi Andy,
My name is Shauna. Me and my friend Dave were at the show last night and we met Gwyn beforehand. We all talked a little and we know she drives a black Toyota Prius and she went to Oberlin College before vet school. I’m sorry, we don’t know her last name, or where she works, or her number. We know she takes her piercings out for work and hasn’t done drugs for years. Hopefully what we know might help some? Good luck Andy, we love you and BVB!
-Shauna :O)’

Yes! Well- sort of. I wasn’t sure how it would help me to know what kind of car she had… it wasn’t like I could put out an APB on her for fuck’s sake. I didn’t know what year she graduated from college (I didn’t know it was different from vet school, to be honest- you had to do both?), but maybe I could try and use that somehow?

Putting out my cigarette, I decided to thank the girl, first and foremost:

‘Shauna-
Thank you so much. It most definitely will help. If you like, if you send me your address, I can send you and Dave something as thanks when I get done with tour?
Andy’

I put three reminders in my phone for around the time I should get home, and then go back to sorting through messages. After another 30 minutes, I decide to take a break, and transfer some stuff up to my hotel room.

Notes

Comments

*NOTE* The author of this story no longer has access to her account due to site malfunction.
SmuttyPariah SmuttyPariah
4/15/17

Ok, cool. I don't mind plodding plots at all, but as a frustrated English teacher, I can totally understand the grammar and structure stuff.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh, i'm not changing it significantly in that regard. i mean more a stylistic change to make it easier to read: breaking up paragraphs, improving grammar and tense consistency, stuff like that. i've become a much better writer and i want my stuff to reflect that. if you're nervous about the changed, you can check out the newest version on my wattpad account. my user name is anathemadvm, just plain anathema was taken. i'm still likely to further revise the very beginning a little, but nothing is plot related, i like the plot as much as i ever did. i just want it to be easier to read, that's all.

anathema anathema
1/26/17

@anathema
Actually, the beginning of LoJ fits the story perfectly, IMHO. You establish Gywn as a likeable, but clearly flawed character from the door. It's much different from most other fanfic, which want to get to the Bride(s) ASAP.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh my goodness! i don't think even i have read it that many times, though i could be wrong! i've certainly only read it through once in one sitting! i promise that the edited version is higher quality, but i don't dare tinker with it here until i have the whole thing ready to go. right now i've edited through chapter 50, though i might need to ahve another look at the very beginning, because it's so plodding.

anathema anathema
1/26/17