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Homepage › Stories › The story of a lonesome ol'Jerome › Chapter 36

The story of a lonesome ol'Jerome

Twitter

I had had seen Andy's official Twitter page before and recognized it, though I didn't 'tweet' myself. The actual entry was pretty short:

BVB Army, I need your help. Please read: (it had a link to an instagram photo of me here)

Message for Gwyn: (this was a link to an instagram upload of an image of text)

I didn't know what to click first. I figured that the links must have been because Twitter had a word limit? I clicked on the message to me.

"Gwyn, I'm so sorry. I overreacted. I really want to see you again, please. Please forgive me. Please message me with your number or something and a photo so I know it's really you, ok? I will keep trying to find you, I know you are special and I want a chance." My heart soared. I couldn't think... I felt frantic with excitement.

I went back and clicked on the link with my photo. It was a shot of me from the waist up, looking pissed. The description said: "BVB Army, this is Gwyn. Juliet and I have been poly for our entire relationship, but Gwyn is the first girl other than Juliet that got me thinking with more than my dick. But I made a mistake, and now I have no way of contacting her again, after I hurt her feelings. Please help me find her and apologize. I know she's a veterinarian, and probably lives and practices in Washington."

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SmuttyPariah SmuttyPariah
4/15/17

Ok, cool. I don't mind plodding plots at all, but as a frustrated English teacher, I can totally understand the grammar and structure stuff.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh, i'm not changing it significantly in that regard. i mean more a stylistic change to make it easier to read: breaking up paragraphs, improving grammar and tense consistency, stuff like that. i've become a much better writer and i want my stuff to reflect that. if you're nervous about the changed, you can check out the newest version on my wattpad account. my user name is anathemadvm, just plain anathema was taken. i'm still likely to further revise the very beginning a little, but nothing is plot related, i like the plot as much as i ever did. i just want it to be easier to read, that's all.

anathema anathema
1/26/17

@anathema
Actually, the beginning of LoJ fits the story perfectly, IMHO. You establish Gywn as a likeable, but clearly flawed character from the door. It's much different from most other fanfic, which want to get to the Bride(s) ASAP.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh my goodness! i don't think even i have read it that many times, though i could be wrong! i've certainly only read it through once in one sitting! i promise that the edited version is higher quality, but i don't dare tinker with it here until i have the whole thing ready to go. right now i've edited through chapter 50, though i might need to ahve another look at the very beginning, because it's so plodding.

anathema anathema
1/26/17
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