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The story of a lonesome ol'Jerome

So vanilla

*Gwyn’s POV*

It was kind of insane to think that, technically, we were having missionary sex. Supposed to be very vanilla, very boring. Everybody did it. But this was not boring. I had never been plowed like this before.

It felt like the pleasure was building up into some kind of mountain that would destroy me, and it was useless to try and escape. Not that I wanted to. I clung to Andy, feeling his taut back working as he fucked me.

I kept cumming, screaming Andy’s name, disbelieving of the euphoria I was experiencing. Each time he would slow down his pace for a minute or so, kissing and caressing me gently, complimenting me, before his desire would build and he would quicken again.

I felt Andy’s cock stiffen inside of me and I moaned, clutching at his back. His gaze intensified and his thrusts grew more aggressive. I felt another growing ball of pleasure waiting to be released from between my legs. Andy gripped my breast and slammed into me, over and over.

Reality was slipping, my eyes rolled back in my head as I moaned, trying to hold out for Andy. I heard him say quietly, “Gwyn-“ and then he came, letting out a low, gritty groan, his cock throbbing, his thrusts now slow as he rode out his orgasm.

I immediately got off on his pleasure, and shockwaves went through my body. “Andy!” I managed, struggling to stay conscious.

He collapsed onto me, kissing me from where his head had fallen, with his nose totally smooshed against my neck. We were both panting, sweaty, and blissful.

Notes

so- what will happen post-coitus? does Andy actually like Gwyn, or was she just convenient at the time? is Andy even ready to try and have an actual emotional bond with a woman other than Juliet? and how would Gwyn cope with it, if Andy were only interested in a 'secondary' relationship, when she doesn't like being in polyamorous relationships with hierarchies/prioritization? we shall see- i have some thoughts but i need to leave for a rotation for a couple weeks and i don't have a laptop.

Comments

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SmuttyPariah SmuttyPariah
4/15/17

Ok, cool. I don't mind plodding plots at all, but as a frustrated English teacher, I can totally understand the grammar and structure stuff.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh, i'm not changing it significantly in that regard. i mean more a stylistic change to make it easier to read: breaking up paragraphs, improving grammar and tense consistency, stuff like that. i've become a much better writer and i want my stuff to reflect that. if you're nervous about the changed, you can check out the newest version on my wattpad account. my user name is anathemadvm, just plain anathema was taken. i'm still likely to further revise the very beginning a little, but nothing is plot related, i like the plot as much as i ever did. i just want it to be easier to read, that's all.

anathema anathema
1/26/17

@anathema
Actually, the beginning of LoJ fits the story perfectly, IMHO. You establish Gywn as a likeable, but clearly flawed character from the door. It's much different from most other fanfic, which want to get to the Bride(s) ASAP.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh my goodness! i don't think even i have read it that many times, though i could be wrong! i've certainly only read it through once in one sitting! i promise that the edited version is higher quality, but i don't dare tinker with it here until i have the whole thing ready to go. right now i've edited through chapter 50, though i might need to ahve another look at the very beginning, because it's so plodding.

anathema anathema
1/26/17