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The story of a lonesome ol'Jerome

Silenced

*Gwyn’s POV*

It felt a little like some of the drugs I did when I was younger, a little like being hit with sports equipment in the head or genitals, and a little like having the hottest sex in the entire fucking universe. Whatever Andy’s cock was like, it was instantly addictive. I loved it.

I leaned over Andy and ground against him, feeling his fucking huge cock moving inside of me. I rubbed my clitoris against him as we went, it was swollen and slick with my fluids. Andy massaged my breasts and returned my kisses. I started to feel a heightening of sensation, this time deep inside of me. Andy felt me tightening around him, the quickening of my pace, and his eyes twinkled.

“Now, remember our agreement.” I nodded and kissed him. I wanted so much to please him as much as he was pleasing me. I was getting treacherously closer.

“Uh…Andy, fuck, I-“ He grinned mischievously and placed his hands, with precision, around my throat. I couldn’t breathe. I couldn’t say his name. I tried to stop so I wouldn’t cum, but it felt too good, I was too close, and he was ramming me on his cock, using leverage from his elbows.

I came so hard my vision went white as ecstasy thrilled through me. My oxygen levels were low, so I had a throbbing sensation in my chest and head. I felt him release my larynx, and I sucked in air. “Andy!”

“Too late,” he said teasingly, planting kisses on my breasts, as I tried not to completely collapse. My arms shook with the effort. “You broke our agreement, I guess you’ll have to make it up to me later somehow.”

Andy smiled and kissed me on the lips, caressing my face. “But for now, just don’t make the same mistake twice.” He kneaded my breasts a little roughly, kissing me harder, and I clung to him, feeling weak from the pleasure. “Let’s switch. Get your head up on the pillow, I see you need a little break. There, that’s it.”

He folded my legs up over his shoulders and I tremored in anticipation. He paused, looking at me, with his clear, blue eyes. “You want me?”

“Yes, yes, Andy, yes, please!” I tried to pull him closer, tried to guide him inside of me, but he would not be rushed, he just smiled and slowly leaned in. His breath was hot on my skin and I felt the head of his cock probe stiffly between my legs. I lifted my hips, and then he was inside me again and I was transcendent.

Notes

Comments

*NOTE* The author of this story no longer has access to her account due to site malfunction.
SmuttyPariah SmuttyPariah
4/15/17

Ok, cool. I don't mind plodding plots at all, but as a frustrated English teacher, I can totally understand the grammar and structure stuff.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh, i'm not changing it significantly in that regard. i mean more a stylistic change to make it easier to read: breaking up paragraphs, improving grammar and tense consistency, stuff like that. i've become a much better writer and i want my stuff to reflect that. if you're nervous about the changed, you can check out the newest version on my wattpad account. my user name is anathemadvm, just plain anathema was taken. i'm still likely to further revise the very beginning a little, but nothing is plot related, i like the plot as much as i ever did. i just want it to be easier to read, that's all.

anathema anathema
1/26/17

@anathema
Actually, the beginning of LoJ fits the story perfectly, IMHO. You establish Gywn as a likeable, but clearly flawed character from the door. It's much different from most other fanfic, which want to get to the Bride(s) ASAP.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh my goodness! i don't think even i have read it that many times, though i could be wrong! i've certainly only read it through once in one sitting! i promise that the edited version is higher quality, but i don't dare tinker with it here until i have the whole thing ready to go. right now i've edited through chapter 50, though i might need to ahve another look at the very beginning, because it's so plodding.

anathema anathema
1/26/17