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The story of a lonesome ol'Jerome

Nine!

*Gwyn's POV*

“How many piercings do you have down here?” Andy said, beaming. I got that reaction a lot from lovers, my junk was pretty universally popular.

“Nine.” I smirked a little to myself, I couldn't help it. I was proud of those babies. “You, um, can touch them.” I laid back, a bit shy still but exhilarated. "The one in the center is a hood piercing, it’s over my clitoris. The rest are labia pierc-guh-“ Andy started massaging my clitoris vigorously. I could feel it swelling up against his skilled fingers like a ripe berry.

“These are awesome!” Andy said, enthralled. “So you didn’t really say, what gets you off, what do you like, hmm?” I, admittedly, was not paying very close attention, as the man was fucking excellent with his hands. “Gwyn?” He stopped and looked expectantly at me.

Desperately wanting more, I was filled with a rush of boldness. I sat up in a bit of a crouch, bringing my face close to Andy's, and look him in the eye as I wrapped my hand around his cock to squeeze and tug it. I started off tentatively. “I like pleasing my partner too, Andy.” I kissed him, I stroked his small nipples. “While I do enjoy some rougher things sometimes, like choking, biting, slapping, spanking or kinkier stuff, I also enjoy vanilla sex, ok? I know it’s silly, but I like getting compliments during sex, and I like being fingered. I guess my one tendency is that I tend towards submissive, though I don’t like being called names. Does that help?” I was blushing furiously and I couldn’t look at him. But as I said that, I felt his dick turn to fucking iron in my hand.

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SmuttyPariah SmuttyPariah
4/15/17

Ok, cool. I don't mind plodding plots at all, but as a frustrated English teacher, I can totally understand the grammar and structure stuff.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh, i'm not changing it significantly in that regard. i mean more a stylistic change to make it easier to read: breaking up paragraphs, improving grammar and tense consistency, stuff like that. i've become a much better writer and i want my stuff to reflect that. if you're nervous about the changed, you can check out the newest version on my wattpad account. my user name is anathemadvm, just plain anathema was taken. i'm still likely to further revise the very beginning a little, but nothing is plot related, i like the plot as much as i ever did. i just want it to be easier to read, that's all.

anathema anathema
1/26/17

@anathema
Actually, the beginning of LoJ fits the story perfectly, IMHO. You establish Gywn as a likeable, but clearly flawed character from the door. It's much different from most other fanfic, which want to get to the Bride(s) ASAP.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh my goodness! i don't think even i have read it that many times, though i could be wrong! i've certainly only read it through once in one sitting! i promise that the edited version is higher quality, but i don't dare tinker with it here until i have the whole thing ready to go. right now i've edited through chapter 50, though i might need to ahve another look at the very beginning, because it's so plodding.

anathema anathema
1/26/17