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The story of a lonesome ol'Jerome

Let me clean your wounds

*Gwyn's POV*

“Yeah! Actually, do you guys have a bathroom? I need to take a piss,” I said. The idea of going on BVB’s tour bus made me really nervous, I didn’t belong there, but I did need to piss, and it was almost an hour’s drive home. I assumed the venue was closed.

“Definitely.” Andy took the lead, and we walked back towards the bus. Inside, it was fucking huge and very beige, which was a little weird, but, um, whatever. It’s not like I’d ever been inside a tour bus before.

“Hold on, just make yourself comfortable,” Andy said, and he went over to a little sink and took his gloves off. He came back with a moist, warm washcloth. He sat facing me on the black couch, and took my small, chubby hands in his much larger ones. He didn’t say anything, he just started gently dabbing and cleaning out the grime. I felt like I should say that I didn’t need help, that I could do it myself, but I didn’t want to, I couldn’t make myself do it.

He worked so carefully. I had a very high pain tolerance, but Andy didn’t know that, and he kept watching me to make sure it didn’t sting too much. It was so sweet. When all the cuts were cleaned out, he looked up, satisfied. “There, much better.” He looked like he was about to say something, but I just couldn’t wait any longer-


Notes

So, obviously, I wrote a bunch of this in advance... Please be warned, there will be graphic smut, though I will label those chapters.



Comments

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SmuttyPariah SmuttyPariah
4/15/17

Ok, cool. I don't mind plodding plots at all, but as a frustrated English teacher, I can totally understand the grammar and structure stuff.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh, i'm not changing it significantly in that regard. i mean more a stylistic change to make it easier to read: breaking up paragraphs, improving grammar and tense consistency, stuff like that. i've become a much better writer and i want my stuff to reflect that. if you're nervous about the changed, you can check out the newest version on my wattpad account. my user name is anathemadvm, just plain anathema was taken. i'm still likely to further revise the very beginning a little, but nothing is plot related, i like the plot as much as i ever did. i just want it to be easier to read, that's all.

anathema anathema
1/26/17

@anathema
Actually, the beginning of LoJ fits the story perfectly, IMHO. You establish Gywn as a likeable, but clearly flawed character from the door. It's much different from most other fanfic, which want to get to the Bride(s) ASAP.

Merelan Merelan
1/26/17

@Merelan


oh my goodness! i don't think even i have read it that many times, though i could be wrong! i've certainly only read it through once in one sitting! i promise that the edited version is higher quality, but i don't dare tinker with it here until i have the whole thing ready to go. right now i've edited through chapter 50, though i might need to ahve another look at the very beginning, because it's so plodding.

anathema anathema
1/26/17