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The Pits

Chapteruh 3

Jasmine POV


"Shit shit shit! I'm going to be late for the sign up!" I yelled while running past people, well pushing, but I didn't care. I was going to be late! So close to the warehouse. You see the new pit I'm going to is underneath a warehouse that is abandoned. After many turns and much running I finally made it. Slowing down i walked up to the warehouse doors and entered. At the very back was a giant metal door which i knocked on. A small rectangle on the door opened, only allowing me to see the mans eyes.

"Password?" He asked. All the pits had one.

"Black Veil Brides." It was a weird password and the correct one seeing as how I was let in and then lead down at least two flights of stairs. The friend that told me about this pit said the password was the name of five guys that owned the pit. Don't know why though.

Well when we made it down the last step the man returned up the stairs. I walked towards a table that had a woman that was heavily inked. She was obviously looking me up and down.

"You sure you in the right place sweetheart?"

"Obviously or I wouldn't even be here." Was my smart ass reply. I'm so nice.

"Okay well sign this and your in." I gladly took the paper, signed and gave it back. "Goodluck and I'll be watching. Names JJ by the way."

"Thank you JJ, I like you already." I smiled and so did she, then walked away.

When I entered, I saw people everywhere. Businessmen and women up in booths that looked over the pit, conversing and probably betting with each other. The people on the floor surrounding the pit though were the complete opposite with tattoos, leather vests and tight pants. I stood out from all of them,mwearing a black beanie, a tight light pink tube top and black waist high shorts with black sandals. Yeah I look like a flower in a patch of blackberries. People were looking at me oddly when I passed the. 'Gee, do they all have to stare? I'm only trying to get close to the pit.' I thought.

Turning around I looked at them. "Can y'all stop your damn staring. It's like you've never seen a girl wear pink before! God damn." And immediately they turned away, but a few just scowled at me, which i flipped them off and walked away. Finally I was close to the pit, it was more of a ring really, I guess Pit just stuck though.

Putting my bag on the ground next to the corner of the ring I saw a guy get dragged out of the pit all bloody and beat.

"The winner is John!" Said the ref holding up the dudes arm. John walked out the pit, more than likely to get his money. Soon after a small break the ref was back up and announcing the final fight.

"Last fight of the day everybody! So place your bets on either left or right! Once the fight begins there is no changing your place of bet!" Rules for every pit is that you place a bet on either left or rght without knowing who you are betting on. If that person wins you get a portion of the money made and so does the fighter. Believe me, the money is a huge amount. "Now on my right we have Raul! Our top second with over 100 wins and 15 losses!" In came a tall, buff man. Some people cheered others groaned for not betting on the right. Oh did i mention i signed up as 'Jay' and to fight against men chosen at random by the owner of the pit? No? Well now you know.

"And on my left we have the newbie! Jay!" I took off my beanie and sandals, putting my hair in a bun. I never wore shoes in a fight. People laughed when they saw me, i didnt care.

"Now the rules. There are none, you both are free to do whatever, just stay in the pit." We both nodded at him. "Shake hands." I put my hand out to shake which the chubaca guy grabbed and pulled me towards his body. 'Really? Does this guy not know what wax or razor means?'

"Not to late to back out sweetness and have fun at my place." He whispered in my ear. I wonder if i will see r2d2 there..?

"Okay, ew. No." I said pushing away from him. Looking towards the ref i said "Can we start now?"

"Okay. Positions!" He had his arm up. I just stood there arms crossed. Chubaca got into a fighting stance. Letting his arm down while saying fight, chubaca threw a right hook. Predictable. I grabbed his fist that was about an inch from my jaw with ease. Quickly while holding his fist, i used my left hand to push his elbow. I heard a satisfying pop and a yell.his arm fell uselessly to his side, so given the opportunity of his distraction i roundhoused the side of his head, making his neck snap to the left. He fell to his knees, right hand holding his ear. Now for the finale i brought my knee under his chin and heard another pop and it was loud. There he lay on his back unconscious, i made sure not to kill him. I smiled throughout the whole thing though.

"Seriously? This is what i fought?" I said looking to the ref who was looking at me with wide eyes and mouth agape.

"U-uh y-yeah..O-our winner is Jay! And she beat Raul under FIVE MINUTES!!"

Everyone was quiet, well until I heard someone clapping. I looked t where it was coming from and when I did I was surprised to say the least.

"Hey Asshole. Whatcha doin here?" And thats when everyone gasped "Seriously y'all gasp over that, but don't make any noise when I finished my fight. Well fuck you all then." That's when asshole also laughed, along with four dudes, which I assumed were his friends since they were in the same booth.

"Nice to see you too little shit." Said asshole smirking at me. Well jesus motherfucking christ i wanna stab him in the eyes.












Notes

Ah!! This took so long!! Sorry i couldnt upload like i said the other day..was sith my dad this weekend and he hates when i am on my tablet. But anyways expect one later! I liked it so tell me what you think?!!


my hands are cramping btw..

Comments

You killed juliet... Didn't see that coming xDDD

AnAngelHasClaws AnAngelHasClaws
6/26/15

Omg, omg please update soon that was awesome and I can't wait for the next chapter, it was so intense

Babydontcut16 Babydontcut16
6/19/15

Omg, omg please update soon that m was awesome and I can't wait for the next chapter, it was so intense

Babydontcut16 Babydontcut16
6/19/15

Omg, omg please update soon that m was awesome and I can't wait for the next chapter, it was so intense

Babydontcut16 Babydontcut16
6/19/15

I love this!!!! Please update soon!!!!!

RainbowTurtle5 RainbowTurtle5
6/15/15