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The author starts describing like this:
"I woke up at 6am.
I took a shower.
I got dressed.
I packed my bag for school.
I ate breakfast."
And then it goes into:
"His pale skin shimmered underneath the bright moonlight and his eyes sparkled a baby blueish hue, like that of a gem."
You were writing like a kindergartener and now you're writing like a professional author?
DAFUQ IS THIS SHIT?!
Constructive Criticism-Credit to chipmunkcalling
I currently have two stories ongoing on this site , and my roomie posts her stuff on Wattpad , and we've noticed a theme with the fanfics on both sites . We've reached the conclusion that roughly 90% of the stories are written with a main character who is a self - harming depressed emo chick , who is either abused by her parents or lives in an orphanage . Are people trying to say that these are the only type of girls who are interested in BVB ? If I read one more of these , I may run shrieking into the streets .
Not all of them . The OFC in my story is 5'10" tall , only an inch shorter than Ashley . She also has curly , normal color hair , a real job , and a non - standard name , WITH a middle name . Plus a normal family who doesn't hate her . So I suppose that makes her the anti - Christ of fanfic characters , right ?
I miss these :3
9/5/17