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[Part Sixty-Four] Utopia

Andy’s POV:

It’s been months and she still hasn’t opened up her eyes. The doctors have said that she might not wake up. CC and I have both stayed here the longest, spending as much time as possible here. She still looked dead. Her beautiful skin was pale as snow and her sparkling eyes seemed so sunken in.
She really must’ve done some damage. The amount of blood loss she had put her into a coma. I wish I was there sooner to help her. I could have been and I wasn’t.
While I stare at her I wonder what kind of storm is going on in that head of hers, and if she is dreaming away a utopia that she wants to be reality.
I’ve cried too many times to cry ever again. I treated her like shit by cheating on her and now I am not even able to tell her I’m sorry. I may never be able to say those two words to her and that’s what scares me the most. I want things to be like what they use to be like.
“I’m sorry…” I whispered, still staring at her dead-like body. “Please wake up soon, Princess…” I then stood up, leaving the hospital room to grab something to eat.

Please, please show them that they are wrong.

Notes

im sorry plz dont hate me

*hides behind chair*

Comments

I loved it. Amazing story

Damn well you aren't the only one going thru shit I am to and well this story is such an amazing story you should write more often
jaay_black jaay_black
7/7/16

So I just finished the story and wow... I'm speechless.
This story was really beautiful and I have cried a lot, way too much I think. I have also read all the notes, and I hope your going well now, I have been depressed too but I didn't tell anyone, I did self-harm, but not that much, because I immediately try to stop after like ten cuts. And I have never cut since then. I'm kinda proud of me, I have stop counting the days, but I think I stopped around 462 or something like that. If you need some help, I am here.
Also, I am not form Lebanon but I have a lot of Lebanon friends, so if you want to ask something, I can ask them.
And for the sequel, I don't have that much ideas, but what about a flashback to when the main character was living with Ashley, like her feelings and everything.

I hope I helped you! ;)

(Sorry if my English isn't perfect, I'm French)

Cherybde Cherybde
4/17/16

Please Do a Sequel

It would be AWESOME

BlacKiM BlacKiM
4/11/16