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Short cuts are never a good idea

Anya's Point of View

Black Veil Brides where amazing. They sang, Coffin, In The End, Fallen Angels, Wretched and Divine, Perfect Weapon, Knives and Pens and loads more. When the concert ended everyone turned to leave.
"Do you want me to walk you home?" I heard Jason's voice in my ear.
"No. Don't worry. I know your mum will be mad at you if you're not home in time."
"Don't worry about mum."
"Oh but I do. I'll see you soon."
"Okay." He kissed me and reluctantly turned to walk back to his house.

I decided to take a short cut and go up through the ally. Nobody normally went that way, it was a quite area. I walked through the ally. It was long and thin, my footsteps where echoing off the walls that surrounded me. I heard laughing behind me. I turned to see three men following me. Drunk men. Quickening my pace I turned back. I heard them getting closer to me before and hand reached out to grab my shoulder, spinning me around. The guy was tall with blond hair and rotting teeth. The stench of alcohol was disgusting. They surrounded me. I was trapped.
"Don't touch me." I said, trying to sound stubborn but failing. One grabbed my waist pulling me towards them.
"I said don't touch me!" My voice was getting louder now. Another grabbed my thigh. That was it. I swung a fist at the guy that had my waist and I kicked, the one that had my thigh, in the crotch. I broke into a run. I felt an arm wrap around my throat turning me back to face them, again. The guy who I kicked was curled in a ball on the floor and the guy who I punched was slouched against a wall. His eyes shut.
"Where do you think you're going?" He grabbed my throat with his hand smashing me against the wall. A long blood-curdling scream escaped my lips. I thrashed trying to get him off me before he slammed me against the wall. That's when everything went black...

Notes

Sorry it's a short chapter. I will be posting another one in a second. Please comment and if you have any ideas to what could happen please tell me. Thank you.

Comments

@BeccaComaxx
I'm sorry but I just have no ideas at all. If I think of any I will write it but that might be tomorrow or it could be next year. I'll see what I think of.

Perfect__Weapon Perfect__Weapon
12/26/14

@I'm a Purdy Girl
I don't think I will write another one, but you never know. I write down a few ideas before I do so it doesn't turn into something like this where I stop.

Perfect__Weapon Perfect__Weapon
12/26/14

Can you at least write one more chapter where CC plays his prank? Please I love this story

BeccaComaxx BeccaComaxx
12/13/14

U could write a sequel or another story, but if u choose not to its fine. If u do could u send me the link please.

xXMonsterbuddyXx xXMonsterbuddyXx
12/13/14

@hannah...
Thanks for your comment and thank you for your support. I'm glad my fanfic could be your first. I'm sorry I'm not contiuing it but I just don't have any ideas. Thank you though.

Perfect__Weapon Perfect__Weapon
12/13/14